Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hi Bill, How can I understand this? But somehow I do. Your imagination is something else. I simply don't know where you get it from. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2016

Thank you, Ulla, for the excellent review. Bill

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Huh? How in the world did you manage to write a poem in a language I have never experienced before and make me completely understand it. You must be some kind of magician. As strange as it might seem, I did get completely what you were talking about. Imagine that.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

Thank you, nomi, for checking this out. I was sure that readers would get it without a translation. However, I also put in a 5-7-5 called Flea Busters to aid in understanding.

Comment from krys123

Excellent

Hi Bill;
-I believe I read your 5/7/5 syllabic format before reading this now I totally understand.
-I found this very humorous and very inconceivably funny even though it was a related
political flash fiction story. This fantastic fantasy is both very funny and entertaining
and I could see where Abbott and his friends began this robing to get rid of the freeze they have obtained.
-The imagery that you mentally created was distinctly clear and definitively expressive and vividly descriptive.
-Thanks for sharing and posting and may the good Lord be with you always.
Alex

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

Thank you, Alex, for sticking with this and giving it an excellent review. Bill

Comment from LisaD123

Excellent

This is a very original and entertaining piece. I loved the imagination of the ideas and the way that the dialogue was worked into the story. The last sentence is very powerful in leaving the reader with things to ponder. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

Thank you, Lisa, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from light

Excellent

This sounds like one of my nightmares. I guess the ones who needed to understand the dialog did because they began disrobing. A shield against lab created mites. Sounds like a good thing. LOL
Elaine

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

Thank you, Elaine, for the fun review. Bill

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

LOL! It sounds like a fitting translation to me, Bill. Verrry well done. You sure do have a wild imagination. Love the drone fleas and sprinklets. You should write sci-fi novels. :)

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Jul-2016

Thank you, Phyllis, for the upbeat review. Bill