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A Letter to the Editor

Op-Ed

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Comment from ciliverde
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I wonder if the Thousand Oaks Acorn would print this? I thought about sending them a letter complaining about all the F-ing fireworks, terrifying the war veterans and every dog for miles around.
Great job on this - sarcastic, humorous, but with a deadly vein of truth. We could end up in this place!! F-ing Trump would lead us there.
Carol

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    They're setting off explosives around here. What ever happened to sparklers? Yep, my poor dog is shaking like a leaf. Wow. Can you imagine the homeless vets hearing all the explosions, how awful. I'm just holding my breath over Trump. Surely we aren't that insane. :)) mikey
Comment from seaglass
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Great satire and a food point regarding the Kook who wants to make America Great again. The Eisenhower years were wonderful, if you were the right race and religion and had the accepted sexual preference and if you weren't a pregnant teenage girl.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    HAAAAAHAHAHA! What a concise on the money description of the Eisenhower years. LOL!! How funny. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from Taffspride
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OK Mikey, and what a letter it is too. Much truth in them thar lines. Although I did chuckle a little, I found it does give one something to think about.

I guess we could call their doings, giving it the 'blind eye,' or even, 'it does not apply to me.' Such hypocrisy from them.

I enjoyed reading and think you did a fine job writing it.

Thanks for sharing.

Iechyd da

Ann

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Glad you enjoyed and found some truth AND some chuckles. LOL
    mikey
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The title caught my eye. This essay is well written and causes the reviewer to pause and think. There's a lot to thing about. No matter which side you're on, we are in a huge mess and I see no way out.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    It is a mess, isn't it? So pleased you stopped by. I suppose the first step is to just acknowledge it's a problem. Then we can take it from there. Thanks, mikey
Comment from Gloria ....
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Hey Mav, excellent job writing a satirical letter to the editor. A ton of chuckles poking fun at what appears to be clear hypocrisy linked to the Statue of Liberty (a gift to the USA from France) and equality and freedom for all but only for those who are considered people according to the constitution at the time.

This form can definitely be one of the hottest political potatoes so the author would need to scrupulously inspect the contents for facts as political opponents will jump all over not only the author, but also the media outlet for any misrepresentation of the facts.

So this is in actuality a fiction post even with satirical reference to facts, such as the Donald's oddball domestic and foreign policies--if you can call them that.

Super job and I'm glad you wrote this to clear up the fiction/non-fiction line which really is a tough call, but always err on the side of calling it reality-based fiction.

Lots of chuckles and I might even try writing a letter to the editor myself.

Love it,

Ange




 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Thanks, Ange. I was hoping for your input as I'm a bit unclear as to what constitutes fiction or non-fiction. It's especially difficult for me as I have a tendency to drift off on tangents that are decidedly fictional in nature even in a non-fiction piece. So it can get cloudy.
    Anyway, I'm so thrilled with your response. I'm always pleased when you enjoy my offerings. :))
    Thanks so much.

    Mav
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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LOL
OH my goodness.
You really had me going and then you came to the end.
Absolutely wonderful and a very thought provoking piece at the same time.
You are the best...my hats off to you

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    You are too sweet as always, my friend. Thanks so much, mikey
Comment from Susanne M. Psyris
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mikey, this is excellent. At some points, I laughed, which may have been inappropriate; that's my warped sense of humor. I found your style of writing to be no-nonsense, and matter-of-fact. Gave it creditability. You state your case/opinion in this open letter with humor and a sad truth. Some people will never realize what our past really proves. How inhumane people can be to other people and believe they are right in doing so! Great job. God bless and hugs, Susanne

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    You are wonderfully insightful, Susanne. I do mean to have a lot of truth mixed in here that I hope is discovered amongst the humour or attempt at humour. So delighted you enjoyed and understood. Thanks a million, mikey
Comment from Pantygynt
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Food for thought as they say but just don't think to long. As Kipling said "...and not make thoughts your aim". As one of our briefest reigning kings said before he became king, on seeing the state of the Welsh miners, "Something must be done". And what did he do when he became king? He abdicated in order to marry an American divorcee. Well, I mean to say. A bit much what? I have often wondered why he had to go.

Was it because she was American? An American queen? No I didn't mean it that way. But you can surely see why she wasn't suitable.

Was it because she was a divorcee (twice, wasn't it?). And as king he was defender of the faith. It didn't say which faith mind. Mormons?

Was it because we just could not bear the the thought of praying for "Our sovereign lady, Wallace" every Sunday in church. I mean what next? King Grommet?

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    She was a doll though. What some of us won't do for a girl, eh?
    This was a fun write. My favorite style. I can't believe it's an acceptable form really. LOL mikey
Comment from CEO2020
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Exceptional piece of satire and wit. I hope the readers realize the truth is often spoken in jokes. Therefore this piece should be viewed with eyes wide open.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Thanks a million. You have it right on the money. I often use this style as an excuse to say what ever I want and get it out there. LOL mikey
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A good idea with this one mikey two different era's of 'Times were different back then.' Love the sign off too, that left me smiling, but then I can from Aus. I had no idea what this free-form meant will have to start thinking,
cheers.

 Comment Written 06-Jul-2016


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2016
    Wow. I saw that term, "free form" and I was a bit panicky.
    Well, I guess it gives us a lot of freedom, almost too much. But once we get a topic I think we'll be okay. This was fun to write anyway. LOL mikey