Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This two-ten-two, The Sun, carries the proscribed syllable count and has taken on the hot topic of our local star. The presentation is well displayed.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks Bill.

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Beautiful presentation of your contest entry. Your poem is meaningful and well written. I enjoyed reading it and it flows with a beautiful message about the sun. I love your artwork choice.

Angel123

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks angel for your great comments.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Very nice positive content. The sun keeps us going in reality and emotionally. A sunny day is a joy. Good presentation to accompany your words.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks for your excellent review.

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello mysterious writer
The Sun, is an interesting 2/10/2 poem that focus on our Sun's qualities. It is very old and it shines. Good job with the syllable count.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 31-Jul-2015

Thanks Gypsy.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a spot on line and syllable count. Your imagery is beautiful and you lift the reader to the heavens into the golden light. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Monica for your excellent review , I am pleased you like it.

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Mystery author, this is an excellent entry for this particular competition,Great choice of words for your wonderful artwork, I wish you the best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks Eric for the most encouraging review, much appreciated.

reply by Eric1 on 30-Jul-2015

You are very welcome my friend.

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

A nice little poem, it has a feeling of warmth to it The illustration suits the theme well. I like the line 'solar gold' . A well written piece.

 Comment Written 30-Jul-2015

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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2015

Thanks ellie for your encouraging review.