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The Heart of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Do magpies make pies"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

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Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, LOL....I love this poem...just says what you are thinking...what you are feeling...had a ranting moment...love your poem...and your picture...Luff Linda xxoo love ya...

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks Linda, Love, Carolyn
reply by l.raven on 04-Aug-2015
    you are so welcome my friend...,love ya Linda xxoo
Comment from justjo66
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Yes, sometimes we only get the silly things but hey, I enjoy them, too.
Cute and silly to read. I enjoyed your poem. Only one SPAG I noted: doe's .
Should it not read "does"?
Jo

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks so much, Carolyn
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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I think we should all have a go at writing a bit of 'nonsense' now and again. It's a fun thing to do and you can write anything you want. Love yours! :) Sandra

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    thanks so much, Carolyn
Comment from misscookie
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To methisneededa review.



for life is so serious and moves to fast.
We need time to just do or write silly things or do the things that one dreams. I thank you for this food for thought poem. It made my day.
Cookie

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks so much, Carolyn
reply by misscookie on 04-Aug-2015
    You're very welcome, have a nice day.
    Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    :-) I do write serious things as well. Have been ill so hopefully I will see you again. Happy I made your day. Carolyn
reply by misscookie on 05-Aug-2015
    Get well some, my prayers are with you. Have a blessed day.
    Cookie
Comment from GE Parson
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Let me run a few across you like that.

If a deaf and mute child cusses in sigh language
should he have his/her hands washed with soap?

If two tulip fall in love with each other, do they french kiss?

Do you know why in Iowa there is a state law that people living within ten mile of a cemetery are not allowed to be buried? Anc. because they are still alive.

Does the word "Paradox" a reference to two Doctors
or two boat docks?

And finally Howlong is a Chinaman.

Your partner in Silly,
Jerry


 Comment Written 09-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks so much, Carolyn
Comment from angelface2
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You got that right, Carolyn. Life lately has just not been poetic for me. I think my muse went to Hawaii or somewhere nice. LOL. Maybe I'll just have to start writing nonsense like you and see what comes up. Sometimes that works. :>D Miss Sally

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks, Carolyn
Comment from Tomes Johnston
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This is indeed an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of work. Having no inspiration is a source of inspiration in itself. That is a great lesson indeed.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2015
    Thanks,
    :-) Carolyn
reply by Tomes Johnston on 04-Aug-2015
    My pleasure
Comment from Curly Girly
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To answer your question: Do magpies make pies?
Answer: Only Maggie's Pies.
This made me laugh:
A dear friend once wrote
Sometimes life is not poetic
How true those words are

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
    fun review> thanks Nicole, glad this made you laugh. Sometimes ya just can't help yourself. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi, Carolyn...

_ But it's a fun, silly poem.
_ Love the photo.
_ Sometimes silly is just what the doctor orders.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
    Thanks Jax, I probably should have promoted it, feel bad about only 2 cents :-) .... Glad you enjoyed it.
    Love, Carolyn
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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What a fun and enjoyable poem. The natural way you write this is a joy to read. You are honest - it's silly - and that makes it fun. Greatj ob.

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 Comment Written 08-Jun-2015


reply by the author on 08-Jun-2015
    Hi there,
    I am so happy you enjoyed this, my thanks for your great comments. :-) Carolyn