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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
LOL!!! That was so funny! LOL! I loved this one. Two love birds, one is hungry for some loving, the other is just hungry! The ending is priceless, 'wan't a cracker!! Love it. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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LOL!!! That was so funny! LOL! I loved this one. Two love birds, one is hungry for some loving, the other is just hungry! The ending is priceless, 'wan't a cracker!! Love it. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from Megalips
That's pretty funny right there, Bill. I don't know about Parrots eating opossum, but I suppose they might have to make some adjustments out in the wilds of America. This 'undercover' love affair floating just under the radar is very entertaining!
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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That's pretty funny right there, Bill. I don't know about Parrots eating opossum, but I suppose they might have to make some adjustments out in the wilds of America. This 'undercover' love affair floating just under the radar is very entertaining!
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 02-May-2015
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Thank you, Meg, for the excellent review. I found this photo of what looked like plucked parrots, so...
Comment from emkoutny
I enjoyed this witty little scene-a funny take on lovebirds. I was pleasantly surprised when I realized it was birds talking instead of people. I think that made it more interesting.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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I enjoyed this witty little scene-a funny take on lovebirds. I was pleasantly surprised when I realized it was birds talking instead of people. I think that made it more interesting.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, em, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from lakeport
What she want, indeed a beautiful picture, that's a very lovely story poem. I enjoyed reading. nice flow, God bless you, Lakeport....
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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What she want, indeed a beautiful picture, that's a very lovely story poem. I enjoyed reading. nice flow, God bless you, Lakeport....
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, Lakeport, for the excellent review.Bill
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you are very welcome.lakeport.
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Polly want a cracker You crack me up Bill..This was silly cute for sure...We have two MaCaws and a green parrot that talk somewhat but we sure try and not say Polly Want A Cracker
around or we would be hearing that all day long!!
tk
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Polly want a cracker You crack me up Bill..This was silly cute for sure...We have two MaCaws and a green parrot that talk somewhat but we sure try and not say Polly Want A Cracker
around or we would be hearing that all day long!!
tk
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, TK, for reviewing this. Little humor to start the weekend. Bill
Comment from krys123
Bill;
+ Superbly inquisitive, witty and clever, and especially great resourceful imagination which is truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout this writing. I relished this short script And thought it was not only humorous but very funny.
+ Good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Excellent scenery and imagery in the picture which is so relative and complementary to the writing.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting this Bill and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Bill;
+ Superbly inquisitive, witty and clever, and especially great resourceful imagination which is truly inventive and ingeniously creative throughout this writing. I relished this short script And thought it was not only humorous but very funny.
+ Good use of enjambment which is the running on of a thought and concepts in one stanza and line to the next without a syntactical break.
+ Excellent scenery and imagery in the picture which is so relative and complementary to the writing.
+ Thank you for sharing and posting this Bill and may the good Lord be with you always my friend.
Alex
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, Alex, for the great review. Bill
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You are so sincerely welcome, Bill
Comment from robina1978
This is outrageously nice. The photo shows two birds in a pond. They talk together about whether it is a safe spot. They are in love. Then Polly gets hungry and her man is going to fetch her a cracker.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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This is outrageously nice. The photo shows two birds in a pond. They talk together about whether it is a safe spot. They are in love. Then Polly gets hungry and her man is going to fetch her a cracker.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, Ine, for the excellent review. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Polly& Wayne may want to be careful. Chirpes is canarial disease with no known tweetment. Hopefully they use...well, you know,-- protection...when they fool around. I heard Planned Parrothood will give you some for free, so they have no excuse. 8})
Good stuff, Bill. A Bill writing about two bills....Brother could you spare a dime, heh-heh...
~Dean
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Polly& Wayne may want to be careful. Chirpes is canarial disease with no known tweetment. Hopefully they use...well, you know,-- protection...when they fool around. I heard Planned Parrothood will give you some for free, so they have no excuse. 8})
Good stuff, Bill. A Bill writing about two bills....Brother could you spare a dime, heh-heh...
~Dean
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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You are in good form this morning, Dean. Thanks for looking at this and starting my Friday off on a happy note. Bill
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Heh-heh...I enjoyed the story, Bill. First thing I read when I logged on this morning.
Have a great weekend, buddy. :)
~Dean
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Ha-Ha! Now we are a comedian are we? Polly want a cracker indeed. My kind of humor for sure. Definitely seeing this getting some laughs. Well done. Write on.
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Ha-Ha! Now we are a comedian are we? Polly want a cracker indeed. My kind of humor for sure. Definitely seeing this getting some laughs. Well done. Write on.
Comment Written 01-May-2015
reply by the author on 01-May-2015
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Thank you, Brett, for the excellent review. Bill