Comment from faragon

Excellent

This one had me laughing. Kind of like Dr. Suess. he poem was broken up well to allow for an easy read. I enjoyed it very much!

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2014

Dr. Suess was exactly who I was trying to emulate, with a little bit of Lewis Carol and H.P. Lovecraft tossed in for good measure, LOL.

Thanks again, Jane. God bless! ;)

~Dean

Comment from Green Lake Girl

Excellent

Truly bizarre and funny, Dean. Congratulations on your win. Your "photos" are priceless. The second one was most disturbing! LOL Such a good woman, Mary--able to look past all of Dexter's flaws, except one. Very entertaining!

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2014

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Pure nonsense....I see why the misinformed besotted Mary was fascinated...
Yikes the places your mind goes Dean...and a new year is looming...I still haven't been so scared I scream shrilly yet...aye there is the challenge
God bless

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2014

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thanks for sharing your fun in this series and your continuing theme, even at Christmas time, on your profile page with the curious picture. Your "insulation" reference is choice, and I enjoyed the rhymes. Merry, merry- Joan, from off the coast of Chile

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2014

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

You nailed this funny nonsense poem writing prompt and will certainly receive my vote as I finish this review. Too much fun was this masterfully crafted piece you have delivered my friend. How delicately frivolous one's mind can be as the creative juices take the reins. Good luck with this winning piece!
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Dec-2014

Thanks for your support, Steve, and for the complimentary comments as well. All are appreciated, my friend, and Merry Christmas to you! :)

~Dean

Comment from RYME4U

Excellent

This is really a great nonsense poem. In a way the nonsense makes sense! Well written and nicely rhymes, The presentation is unique and clever. Good job!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks very much for your excellent review, Charlotte. I hope you & your family have a very merry Christmas and a safe, happy & prosperous New Year.

reply by RYME4U on 25-Dec-2014

Thank you Dean, The same to you. Loved your nonsense poem.

Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

Dean as a maggot. Dean the cricket. Dean as Hell-raiser. My must reboot my brain after this peculiar incident of... the closest encounters of the freaky kind. What goes on in Spooky Dean's mind is mind-boggling. I can't get them images off my mind. Weird is an understatement, adjective that describes. That said, I like humor, I love looking at this oddball scenes. I believe that maggot describes Dean the best. Hilarious x square root of altitude x 1.25. Formula for a P-3 Orion's radar horizon. Has no connections, but this has none either. Interesting word choices just as weird. I'm puzzled? Debunked in the theory of evolution. Cloned mixed breeds may have been created here. Dean, a maggot, a cricket, flew in a B-17 Bomber Squadron, got zapped by radiation from the bomb! Count your doubloon. I wish you luck in this? Spoo-a-Doo, boo...

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Dear Wackydo,

Thank you, kind sir, for your in depth analysis of my work. The contest specifically asked for nonsense, and that is what I set out to give them...and then some, LOL!

As to this Dean character you've mentioned, I can only assume he's a fellow member here.

Thank you for your kindness and comments in your review.

~Anonymous for now...~ ;)

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Where on earth do you find these creepy moving pictures that make up half of the fun of your stories. Dexter Dope, a laugh right there. Am wondering what the girls saw in him! I'm wondering if that insulation ripples through the house every time a Wuzzy walked by. :-)

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

I for one would be afraid to find out, Spit! Let's both agree not to go there, LOL.

Thanks for the fun review! :)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

LOVE the name :-)
and the invention of a whole type of creature, the willygog LOL
good alliteration in phrases like old man Murray
fantastic descriptive detail
what a fun story of this "player" LOL
This is just delightful, a clever fairytale for adults only ;-) Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks, Brooke, I really appreciate that. Hey, they asked for "nonsense", so I gave 'em my best. Then again, it wasn't really all that big of a stretch for me, heh-heh...

Thanks so much for the fun review! :)

Comment from dennis1

Excellent

Oh my, it's another Dr. Seuss writing. Nonsense poetry is fun to read and children just love to have it read to them - especially with pictures! Superb pictures too.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014

Thanks, Dennis. I hope kids wouldn't be too scared away by this one. I know older kids really like it, I've tried it out on several already, LOL.

Thanks for the review, buddy. Much appreciated! :)