Still Soul Mates
Short Story 149 words9 total reviews
Comment from amanda98653
This is so beautiful.
I used to wonder how people could move on after a failed relationship. Time lessens the pain, but I don't think there's anything that allows someone to fully let go of their past.
Thinking about happy moments make me feel sad sometimes due to my inability to relive them.
Hugs
Amanda
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This is so beautiful.
I used to wonder how people could move on after a failed relationship. Time lessens the pain, but I don't think there's anything that allows someone to fully let go of their past.
Thinking about happy moments make me feel sad sometimes due to my inability to relive them.
Hugs
Amanda
Comment Written 13-Dec-2014
Comment from Dean Kuch
Often, and for many different reasons, people who seemed as if they were made for each other, meant for each other, do not end up with each other. As the metal maniacs, Metallica have said..."Sad, but True>"...
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Often, and for many different reasons, people who seemed as if they were made for each other, meant for each other, do not end up with each other. As the metal maniacs, Metallica have said..."Sad, but True>"...
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from ProjectBluebook
I49 -- I concur... looks like it meets the requirements pf the contest. 35 years later is a-----long----time, brother. Hope it still works. Eternity -- that's it! Place I wanna go. Doves pick their soul mates for life, how true. Looks like a contender -- I'm no pretender. Just do loco.
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I49 -- I concur... looks like it meets the requirements pf the contest. 35 years later is a-----long----time, brother. Hope it still works. Eternity -- that's it! Place I wanna go. Doves pick their soul mates for life, how true. Looks like a contender -- I'm no pretender. Just do loco.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
This defines soul perfectly by showing souls in action. By demonstrating their nature they are fully defined in a way that all the words in the world can't do. Two souls become one...love. perfect.
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This defines soul perfectly by showing souls in action. By demonstrating their nature they are fully defined in a way that all the words in the world can't do. Two souls become one...love. perfect.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from BeasPeas
This poem is a different take on the soul from the other entries. In this case you wrote about soul mates. Still okay as it has to do with the soul. I think there are many couples who can identify with the hiatus and reconnection of lovers.
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This poem is a different take on the soul from the other entries. In this case you wrote about soul mates. Still okay as it has to do with the soul. I think there are many couples who can identify with the hiatus and reconnection of lovers.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is so true to life for some - but time goes on and we have
to move on. Short, sweet and interesting, Michael. I enjoyed it. good luck with the contest.
Margaret
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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This is so true to life for some - but time goes on and we have
to move on. Short, sweet and interesting, Michael. I enjoyed it. good luck with the contest.
Margaret
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Thank you so much. Yes, it doesn't always go the way we wish. It helps if we are writers! :))
Comment from Nosha17
Interesting interpretation of soul; it is heartening that a man and a woman can be soul mates besides being in love-sounds like the recipe for success in any relationship. Well written, with well expressed thoughts and emotions. Good luck in the contest. Faye
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Interesting interpretation of soul; it is heartening that a man and a woman can be soul mates besides being in love-sounds like the recipe for success in any relationship. Well written, with well expressed thoughts and emotions. Good luck in the contest. Faye
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from jmdg1954
Nicely crafted entry into the contest. You captured the essence of the contest very clearly. These stories typically end up with the two people together. Here they have to wait until, death do us part.
Best of luck. John
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Nicely crafted entry into the contest. You captured the essence of the contest very clearly. These stories typically end up with the two people together. Here they have to wait until, death do us part.
Best of luck. John
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
Comment from Jackarrie
I enjoyed your story very much and yes it could be somebody's story. I felt it did not follow the prompt of defining what a soul is. Mary
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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I enjoyed your story very much and yes it could be somebody's story. I felt it did not follow the prompt of defining what a soul is. Mary
Comment Written 03-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2014
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Hi. Thank you. Glad you liked it. I think that by depicting what actual souls do and how they interact does define them. But, you may be right. You do have a good point. :)