Comment from frogbook

Excellent

Of course the name didn't have anything to do with me reading this..haha. I absolutely loved the picture and the poem was really cute. Great use of your few lines.
FROGbook

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2015

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2015

Hahaha, sure it didn't, JoAnn, that's what they ALL say, LOL.
Thanks for taking a jump at this little verse from my "lighter" muse. It doesn't happen very often, LOL...

With gratitude

~Dean ;}

Comment from justafan

Excellent

This one made me really smile. I am amazed at how many directions your talent lies. Truly wonderful sir. This is a keeper :)

Always your fan,
Missy

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2015

Yeah, even I crawl of of my crumbling crypt every now and then, Missy. But, I rarely fare very well when I do. That's why I stick with what I know...how to scare people. LOL.
Thanks a bunch for reviewing this one. ~Dean

Comment from emrpoems

Excellent

Excellent presentation of your poem
Good use of mono rhymes
good alliteration--lost /little
Goo play on words and a very creative idea

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2014

Thank you, emrpoems. I'm very happy you liked it.

Comment from ProjectBluebook

Excellent

Adorable. I always liked frog pictures. This is a Jim Dandy! Like the words too. Looks pretty good to me. Wish you bucket trucks of luck. I fancy the little fellow. Love the cute rhymes. Nicely done. Count your doubloon. spook-a-doo

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014

Thanks, DoLoco, El-Spook-a-doo, and Wackydo. I appreciate all of your kind and thoughtful comments. Heh-heh...

Much appreciated! ;)

reply by ProjectBluebook on 25-Nov-2014

Much obliged. Still got the music. I finally finished the last chapter. Thank god!

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014

I'll be sure to check it out. I've been lookin' forward to it! :}

~SPOOKY

reply by ProjectBluebook on 25-Nov-2014

It's about 2,500 words Spooky. You may be too tired right now. heck, I ain't been to bed, yet. Worked all day on this. Have you slept? This is long, if you ain't slept, it will sap you. Listening to You Are Mu Sunshine embedded in this message. You must had inserted the embed code, pasted in it.

reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014

Nope, but I rarely sleep, Spook. I go three, maybe four days sometimes, without a wink of shuteye. I'm pretty used to it by now.

I did insert the code, but I can't figure out how to go in and edit my replies to make it stop, LOL. I just wanted to show you that it could be done. Now, if only I could un-do it, heh-heh...

reply by ProjectBluebook on 25-Nov-2014

No need. I love it! Keep the song on for me. Maybe I will send you something from the shining, next time I message you. He he.

Comment from mfowler

Excellent

Cute poem doing very well in the polls.
Great sync between image and poem
Like the 'mist' and 'stumped' puns
Monmorhyme gives the 5-7-5 a good flow. Not easy to do.
Snuck in some useful alliteration to aid the flow as well ie little lost, stumped, in such
All the best

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2014

Thanks, Mark, my friend. It was a little more difficult than it looks, that's for sure. It isn't doing all that well in the polls, but it was fun to write.

Thanks for the thoughtful review. :}

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

As always, I like the presentation of your poem
good alliteration in little lost
good use of mono-rhyming
mist-shrouded - add the hyphen
good play on words with literally being in the fog and figuratively being stumped, in a fog :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks for having a look at this, Brooke, and for the helpful review and supportive comments. All are appreciated, very much.

Between hyphens and apostrophes, I think they'll wind up being the death of me! Have mercy... :}

Comment from Capricorn30

Excellent

Good spot-on rhyme in a well-penned animal poem;
Good visuals complement the little amphibian in his cozy tree;
"stumped, in such a fog";--the animal kingdom too has days of confusion and doubts.
I enjoyed your creative little poetry.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks very much, Capricorn30. I certainly enjoyed reading your reply. :)

Comment from Acquired Taste

Excellent

Okay then - witty it definitely is...love the mist shrouded log. Odd looking little creatures - I always think of them Ribbiting - Bud-Wise-Errrrr. Good wishes for the contest. AT=/

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Heh, yeah! I remember those old frogs, Louie the Lizard and the Weasel Budweiser commercials. They're still some of the funniest ever created, except for the E-Trade baby, of course, LOL.

Much thanks for the review, Jean. And thanks for bringing back those old, fond memories.

Bud...wies---e-e-r-r-r-r-r-r-r! heh-heh...

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed you poem. I like the rhyme--log, frog, & fog. Your picture is so fitting (cute, really). Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks, jannypan. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

R-R-R-r-r-r-r-ibit! Right back atcha'. Clever. Tells a short story in rhyme that makes sense. It took some thought to compose this one. I enjoyed reading this cute piece.

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014

Thanks, BeasPeas, you're so kind, my friend. You're right, I did wrack my tired, old brain to try and get it all in there --the subtle rhyming, the puns, and the correct syllable counts. Not as easy as it sounds when your looking at the prompt rules, and thinking about entering. 'How hard can it be?' I thought. LOL.

Thanks again for your encouraging review. I appreciate it, very much. :}