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Sleepy Head-(1-9-1)

waking up in the morning

3 total reviews 
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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The puppy says get up cuz I need to pee. LOL. You did a great job with this and I love your little poem. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2014
    Thank you
Comment from rjpurdy
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I woke up hearing this everyday I school. Now it's everyday before work. This is a fun entry. Best wishes in the Contest. A strong contender for sure. rj

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    Thank you
Comment from kiwisteveh
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I liked the rhyme in your long line and the direct address.

perhaps you could make that final word stand out more by making it a sentence on its own and adding an exclamation mark
Now!

Good luck.

Steve

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2014

reply by the author on 22-Nov-2014
    Thank you for the advice. I will change it.