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Viewing comments for Chapter 117 "Ghouls, goblins and ghosts (5-7-5)"
'Tis not the Bard, but pretty good poetry anyway

17 total reviews 
Comment from ann marie mazz
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good morning carolyn

how adorable is this entry
very

you have met the challenge
the format is true to form
your words tell the magic of this night
your presentation is marvelous
all is well within this entry

thank you for sharing your talent
good luck with the contest
ann marie


w e l l
d o n e

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    Thank you for this great review. I didn't win but it was fun to write. :-) Carolyn
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Fun Halloween 5-7-5, with a cute Yorkie to tie it up in a neat little package. Nicely done.

Best of luck in the contest

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*.*)

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    Thanks Jax, I didn't win but that's ok, it was a fun write. :-0 Carolyn
Comment from lakeport
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Ghouls, goblins and ghosts. indeed Halloween is not far away,that's a ghostly halloween 5/7/5 poem,I enjoyed reading it.Good luck at the contest.God bless you.Hugs!lakeport

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2014
    Thanks E, I had fun with this one. :-) Carolyn
reply by lakeport on 25-Sep-2014
    your welcome.Hugs!lakeport.
Comment from Judy Couch
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Good entry. It meets the requirements of the prompt well. The picture enhances it but is not necessary for the poem to make sense.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Thanks Judy, I enjoyed your review, it affirms the thought of this silly little poem.. :-)
Comment from l.raven
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HI Carolyn, Oh I don't know ...I think I know some Zombies....LOL...but I have seen some pretty scary Zombie movies...even had dreams about them...LOL...I love you poem...and Halloween will be here soon...a great poem...and I so love your picture...luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2014
    Love you too. I won't even ask how you knew it was me. LOL... since it is a 'blind' contest. ... Thanks for this wonderful review. At least it made us laugh. :-) me
reply by l.raven on 24-Sep-2014
    LOL...went to your site...LOL...and you were home...LOL...and you are always sooooooo welcome...Carolyn...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment from emrpoems
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Certainly they are all scary that is why I never engage in Halloween.
Perfect syllable count for the prompt.
all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much for the great review and best wishes.
Comment from JM
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The ghosts may be scary but I love the little dog in your art work. I'm not into zombies but I did enjoy your poem. Should be a Hallmark card.:)

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks JM for this wonderful review....
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This is a wonderful entry which follows the requirements nicely. I like your creative focus on calling out all the usual suspects to get your message across. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks so much for your encouraging review of this funny little poem.. and of course for the best wishes. :-)
Comment from Dean Kuch
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A-w-w-w-w, c'mon. Zombies were people too once, ya know? They just need a little TLC. Well, actually, they need a beating heart and some active brain function as well, but who's splitting hairs here?

Cute little poem, with an adorable accompanying photo to showcase your words.

Well done, and best of luck to you in the contest. :]

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks Dean, I always love your reviews...
reply by Dean Kuch on 23-Sep-2014
    I love fall, when it starts getting closer to Halloween. That's when my type of poetry comes pouring outta the woodwork... of the casket variety, heh-heh.

    You're very welcome.:}
Comment from adewpearl
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your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 syllable count
I like the alliteration in ghouls, goblins and ghost - I'd like it more if you also made ghosts plural
you set the Halloween holiday mood well :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2014


reply by the author on 23-Sep-2014
    Thanks Brooke,