Sun Showers-(3-5-3)
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Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This meets the criteria of the prompt as stated and is correctly done as to form and syllable count. The concrete image is striking, and the presentation is lovely. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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This meets the criteria of the prompt as stated and is correctly done as to form and syllable count. The concrete image is striking, and the presentation is lovely. Good luck, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from granny goes viral
Oh, this is so pretty. The word image as well as the actual visual. Small, compact, wonderfully reminiscent, of the sunbeam itself. good job.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Oh, this is so pretty. The word image as well as the actual visual. Small, compact, wonderfully reminiscent, of the sunbeam itself. good job.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you
Comment from adewpearl
stunning presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count for the contest
good use of enjambment to create one continuous thought
you create a vivid visual as you also create mood well
Brooke
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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stunning presentation of your poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 syllable count for the contest
good use of enjambment to create one continuous thought
you create a vivid visual as you also create mood well
Brooke
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2014
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Thank you