Joyful Spring
a glimpse of springtime5 total reviews
Comment from amada
Sorry i missed this one, Roy. This is just a very beautiful and I would say lyrical work in the magic of spring time. You phrased so well in that tricky 2-20-2 syllable count.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Sorry i missed this one, Roy. This is just a very beautiful and I would say lyrical work in the magic of spring time. You phrased so well in that tricky 2-20-2 syllable count.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2014
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Thank you, amada, for finding and sharing this one. I truly appreciate your interest and your kind praise. RodG
Comment from krowboom
This one is a tongue twister with all the S's.
My soft palate gags as the uvula regresses
It heralds the upcoming spring of seasons
Where poetry abounds without all reasons
You did yourself proud with April's verse
I can't wait for May don't make it terse.
June and July that's the ticket.
You poetry will abound in all its thicket.
Excellent cuckoo or whatever this rhyming pattern is called
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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This one is a tongue twister with all the S's.
My soft palate gags as the uvula regresses
It heralds the upcoming spring of seasons
Where poetry abounds without all reasons
You did yourself proud with April's verse
I can't wait for May don't make it terse.
June and July that's the ticket.
You poetry will abound in all its thicket.
Excellent cuckoo or whatever this rhyming pattern is called
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from adewpearl
Lovely illustration
Your poem is in excellent 2/10/2 syllable count as required by the contest though this form exists nowhere outside of the contest. LOL
you create a pretty scene with a hopeful tone, so appropriate after this harsh winter :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Lovely illustration
Your poem is in excellent 2/10/2 syllable count as required by the contest though this form exists nowhere outside of the contest. LOL
you create a pretty scene with a hopeful tone, so appropriate after this harsh winter :-) Brooke
Comment Written 03-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2014
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Thank you, Brooke, for sharing this one. Yes, I wondered where this 2-10-2 form originated as I've never seen it elsewhere. Rod
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It originated from the same place the 1/6/1 originated - someone desperate for prompt ideas LOL
Comment from Cindy Warren
That's lovely. I hope it happens soon. Our huge piles of snow are still melting. Well, hopefully it will be gone soon and the trees and flowers can bloom. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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That's lovely. I hope it happens soon. Our huge piles of snow are still melting. Well, hopefully it will be gone soon and the trees and flowers can bloom. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you for sharing this, Cindy, and I hope those piles of snow vanish soon.
Comment from c_lucas
April is a month where plants begin to blossom. Your poem has a good flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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April is a month where plants begin to blossom. Your poem has a good flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thank you, c_lucas, for sharing my poem and your encouragement.
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You're welcome.