Not Lost
Rhyming quatrains in iambic tetrameter16 total reviews
Comment from VictoriaJoyce
I really enjoyed your writing. I could 'feel' the love you had for your wife, and through your writing, I can sense the joy that you were able to spend so many years with her, that far outweigh the grief of losing her. I can also sense how you are still able to hold on to the wonderful memories and I felt your gratitude for having so many wonderful years with her, and the rejoicing that comes with knowing you will see her again!
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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I really enjoyed your writing. I could 'feel' the love you had for your wife, and through your writing, I can sense the joy that you were able to spend so many years with her, that far outweigh the grief of losing her. I can also sense how you are still able to hold on to the wonderful memories and I felt your gratitude for having so many wonderful years with her, and the rejoicing that comes with knowing you will see her again!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Victoria. I've been distracted for a while, losing myself, but I'm back now, hoping to make an impression. Peter
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing your spiritual and loving Valentine's poem. I enjoyed all of your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains, but my favorite stanza is the powerful fourth about the "sacred vows". Warm regards- Joan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for sharing your spiritual and loving Valentine's poem. I enjoyed all of your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains, but my favorite stanza is the powerful fourth about the "sacred vows". Warm regards- Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you for your thoughtful comments and your evident appreciation, Joan. Blessings, Peter
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Peter,
Although I do not have the same faith as you, I am so happy that you find comfort in your beliefs in this absolutely charming poem of remembrance.
Best regards
Reg
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Dear Peter,
Although I do not have the same faith as you, I am so happy that you find comfort in your beliefs in this absolutely charming poem of remembrance.
Best regards
Reg
Comment Written 10-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you, Reg, my friend. I've translated your review; it now reads, "Although I'm not a believer, I'm pleased that you are comforted by a delusion."
You too have a faith, of course; it's called atheism, held, apparently by only 2.5 % of the world's population. Where are you going, man? Blessings, Peter
Comment from mermaids
So I can wait, despite this pain
and trust that I"ll see you again
Your two lines of faith give a good feeling throughout the poem. Your use of commas,question marks and other grammatical points add to the flow of the poem. I am often unsure when I write,if I should use these.
I also like the line NOT LOST FOR I KNOW WHERE SHE IS,being capitalized. It makes your theme clear about faith.
This is a poem that shows your love for your wife and how faith can help us. I am sure Jinny is looking at you from heaven and smiling.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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So I can wait, despite this pain
and trust that I"ll see you again
Your two lines of faith give a good feeling throughout the poem. Your use of commas,question marks and other grammatical points add to the flow of the poem. I am often unsure when I write,if I should use these.
I also like the line NOT LOST FOR I KNOW WHERE SHE IS,being capitalized. It makes your theme clear about faith.
This is a poem that shows your love for your wife and how faith can help us. I am sure Jinny is looking at you from heaven and smiling.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and comforting words, Elaine. I find the use of punctuation helpful whether writing or reading. Please ask if you want any pointers, maybe by sending a few poetic lines by private memo. Sorry for taking so long to reply. Blessings, Peter
Comment from His Grayness
Peter: another absolutely lovely work of compassion, love, respect, honor, gratitude, and hope. So much power to be put into a brief poem with all the trust and knowledge that GOD is looking after her now. Blessings, Vance
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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Peter: another absolutely lovely work of compassion, love, respect, honor, gratitude, and hope. So much power to be put into a brief poem with all the trust and knowledge that GOD is looking after her now. Blessings, Vance
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2014
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I'm so sorry for taking an age to respond to your thoughtful review. Thank you so much for your enthusiasm. Blessings, Peter
Comment from GracieAnn
Peter, this is such a tender and lovely write that honors your Jinny and the institution of marriage. I appreciate the rhyme and meter that also convey the promise of God. You mention one of the best verses! :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Peter, this is such a tender and lovely write that honors your Jinny and the institution of marriage. I appreciate the rhyme and meter that also convey the promise of God. You mention one of the best verses! :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 09-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much, Gracie. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter
Comment from GWinterwin
Very pretty poem about your beloved wife, how she was with you last year but not this year. Yes and how God tells us there are many mansions up there. A comforting thought for sure.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Very pretty poem about your beloved wife, how she was with you last year but not this year. Yes and how God tells us there are many mansions up there. A comforting thought for sure.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter
Comment from nancyjam
I wish I had a six for you as this is so beautifully crafted
and emotive.
The loss of a loved one is always painful but when one
realizes they are with Jesus and we will see them again, the sorrow is eased.. In the meantime hold on to those lovely dreams. Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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I wish I had a six for you as this is so beautifully crafted
and emotive.
The loss of a loved one is always painful but when one
realizes they are with Jesus and we will see them again, the sorrow is eased.. In the meantime hold on to those lovely dreams. Nancy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much, Nancy. Sorry to take so long responding. It's all part of my turmoil, Blessings, Peter
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, peter, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the love that has no boundaries and your wife waits for you in Heaven. I enjoyed reading it and give you my last six of the week
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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this is very well written, peter, you did an excellent job writing this poem about the love that has no boundaries and your wife waits for you in Heaven. I enjoyed reading it and give you my last six of the week
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter
Comment from HL Pepper
Okay, now I am crying but out of respect for such a fantastic love story. This is a tremendous tribute to Jinny and to the faith that is our only comfort at times. Thank you for sharing your beautiful wife and for not being afraid to share how much you love her and miss her. I am sure she is sending that love back down to you as well. Blessings!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Okay, now I am crying but out of respect for such a fantastic love story. This is a tremendous tribute to Jinny and to the faith that is our only comfort at times. Thank you for sharing your beautiful wife and for not being afraid to share how much you love her and miss her. I am sure she is sending that love back down to you as well. Blessings!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2014
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Thanks very much for your lovely words. Sorry to take so long responding. Blessings, Peter