Lily Undressing...
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Comment from Fandoodle
You have all the right syllables. Undressing arms-a good description of the lanky stamens. Thanks for sharing it
and your work.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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You have all the right syllables. Undressing arms-a good description of the lanky stamens. Thanks for sharing it
and your work.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2014
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! That means a lot. :)
Comment from l.raven
This is just beautiful...and I love your wording...and the one thing about lilies is they always come back...a beautiful poem and a beautiful picture...well written...
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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This is just beautiful...and I love your wording...and the one thing about lilies is they always come back...a beautiful poem and a beautiful picture...well written...
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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hank you so much always great to hear from you! Have a wonderful day :)
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you are so welcome...xxoo
Comment from RYME4U
Well written and descriptive. I like the metaphor of "undressing arms" Personification is good, too. A well don flower 5/7/5/ poem.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Well written and descriptive. I like the metaphor of "undressing arms" Personification is good, too. A well don flower 5/7/5/ poem.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Thank you! I wanted to try something a little different ;)
Comment from mountainwriter49
Bravo, Greg
You've not only crafted a finely written short poem of nature's lily unfolding its petals and fragrance, you've also created a most wondrous metaphor of life's unfolding. 'The Rolling Winds' metaphor has so many layered meanings.
Well done, my friend.
Ray
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Bravo, Greg
You've not only crafted a finely written short poem of nature's lily unfolding its petals and fragrance, you've also created a most wondrous metaphor of life's unfolding. 'The Rolling Winds' metaphor has so many layered meanings.
Well done, my friend.
Ray
Comment Written 01-Feb-2014
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2014
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Wow I'm truly honored! Thank you so much. I'm immensely grateful that you got the metaphor! i didnt think anyone would. Great. So Insightful! I usually dont write these so I was taking a chance. Again, I'm truly truly grateful for this most generous review. Thank you Ray.
Comment from tfawcus
This poem lends the reader a new perspective, a fresh way of looking at this beautiful flower. Yes, there is something of the sense of the yellow stamens as arms wriggling out of a white dress.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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This poem lends the reader a new perspective, a fresh way of looking at this beautiful flower. Yes, there is something of the sense of the yellow stamens as arms wriggling out of a white dress.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thank you! That's exactly what my goal was, to give a different perspective! Thank you!
Comment from queenv
The beautiful Easter Lily. I love the picture. The words are befitting for this picture. The poem met the criteria of the 5-7-5.Good Job!
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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The beautiful Easter Lily. I love the picture. The words are befitting for this picture. The poem met the criteria of the 5-7-5.Good Job!
Comment Written 31-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2014
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Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! :)