Comment from Silent1rose

Excellent

This is such a lovely lune. Such few words expressing massive beauty. This is well done. Good luck with the contest. I'm still trying to catch up on everyone's works. :) ~ Rose

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2014

Thanks for the wonderful review and best wishes. Rose, I think we are all still behind. :-0 Good luck in catching up. Hugs, Carolyn

Comment from GracieAnn

Excellent

notes, this Lune Poetry Contest entry fulfills the requirements with perfect syllable count and has optimistic meaning. Nicely done. All the best in the contest! :0 GracieAnn

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

Thanks GracieAnn for this wonderful review and good wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Jacq77

Excellent

I don't know a lot about poetry, but I found your words produced a vivid picture in my mind of the brilliance of a newborn star penetrating the black, velvet sky. Yes, such a sight would invigorate the soul. I love gazing up at the stars on a clear night - there is something magical about it. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

And thank you for reading and the great comments Jacq77. I am glad you enjoyed this one. Carolyn

Comment from DALLAS01

Excellent

This is a very creative presentation. I like everything about it. Nice inner line rhyme and alliteration of (s)
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2014

I appreciate your fine remarks so much, :-) Carolyn

Comment from suep

Excellent

I love your Lune! A beautiful poem that is uplifting and inspiring. Great choice of words, and a wonderful presentation. Great job ... Best wishes in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

Thanks suep for the wonderful review, rating and the best wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Schalk Jacobs

Excellent

Like the descriptive word choice. Also enjoyed the manner in which this poem was written with the +-marks in the form of a star. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

What a nice review, thank you so much. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Great use of descriptive words. "Invigorates" describes the emotion of the event of a new star. Well done.

Was wondering if you contemplated the use of "penetrating" with the possibility of using "piercing?"

I think you did well choosing "penetrating" because, "piercing" is over used in these events involving light and night.

Truly reveals your creative and insightful approach.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2014

Thank you so very much for the great comments about New born star. Poems of this nature are definitely a challenge. :-) Carolyn

Comment from NicciFaye

Excellent

Hey Caryoln! A excellent Lune poem for the contest and creatively made. A beautiful bright star does something to the sky and it makes one appreciative of nature enjoy it just a little bit more.

 Comment Written 13-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 13-Jan-2014

Thanks for the great review of this one. Glad you enjoyed it.
:-) Carolyn

reply by NicciFaye on 13-Jan-2014

Sorry I spelled your name wrong...typing to fast. Many blessings Carolyn!

Comment from angelface2

Excellent

Very well done, Carolyn. This is a great poem for the contest and the picture only enhances it. I wish you good luck. MIss Sally

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014

Thanks Miss Sally for the review, rating and good wishes. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

This is quite beautiful from the author in this poem. Stars and indeed celestial objects have been given religious significance and connotations since the beginning of man's time on earth. It is no wonder. I often look up at the night sky in wonder as well.

 Comment Written 12-Jan-2014

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2014

Thanks Tomes, I appreciate your great review of this one.

reply by Tomes Johnston on 13-Jan-2014

My pleasure.