One day at a time 60 word
A cancer patient.6 total reviews
Comment from EMB
This is one of the few short, short, short stories that really leaves the readers hanging. And I'm also left thinking, "How well can a person fight it outside of the hospital?"
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
This is one of the few short, short, short stories that really leaves the readers hanging. And I'm also left thinking, "How well can a person fight it outside of the hospital?"
Comment Written 24-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2014
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I had to check this one out I had forgotten what I had written for the 60 word contest, The fight has to be one of mental strength, In this case she is waiting for a trial, if this is successful her worries will be over. if not I am afraid it is not good news.
So the fight goes on. Thanks for reviewing Mary
Comment from BeasPeas
An inspiration to all of us who have been touched by this or any other illness. This is a resolute patient who is determined to follow through with her treatment. God bless.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
An inspiration to all of us who have been touched by this or any other illness. This is a resolute patient who is determined to follow through with her treatment. God bless.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the review and your comments Mary
Comment from Janie King
I worked in the medical field for 45 years and the patient will live much long, sometimes even overcome by God's intervention the disease. When they give up it's pretty much over. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
I worked in the medical field for 45 years and the patient will live much long, sometimes even overcome by God's intervention the disease. When they give up it's pretty much over. Good luck in the prompt. God loves you and so do I.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the informative comments.
Comment from Smoothiecool
good luck in this contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the fight against Leukemia and the in and out of hospital and the fight to beat it
cheers SC
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
good luck in this contest
your words allow the reader to see and feel the fight against Leukemia and the in and out of hospital and the fight to beat it
cheers SC
Comment Written 04-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2014
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Thanks for your kind review
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welcome
Comment from RedGryffyn
Great poem. It was short but nonetheless I found it amazing. It's truthful and influential. Motivational and meaningful in so few words. Fantastic job.
Red Gryffyn
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
Great poem. It was short but nonetheless I found it amazing. It's truthful and influential. Motivational and meaningful in so few words. Fantastic job.
Red Gryffyn
Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the great review and the wonderful comments.
Comment from mermaids
I like the determination of this lady to win this war. Your word are vivid and inspiring,showing the strength of the human spirit.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
I like the determination of this lady to win this war. Your word are vivid and inspiring,showing the strength of the human spirit.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the great review.