Comment from Charlene0513

Excellent

A wise assumption and one to be heeded. We are all His sheep and when we learn how to love our fellow man this world would never be the same but live under an umbrella of God's love.
Charlene

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

Well thank you so very much for this fine review. I am so glad you found meaning in Similarities.

Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is nice, mystery writer, we are all God's creation and we need to live in harmony with others and show the love that He has for all. i enjoyed reading it, good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2013

This is a great review, thank you for your comments.

Comment from JMUwrites

Excellent

I find this to be a really nice, creatively conceived write, not too heavy in it's intended message, but not light and fluffy either!

Very descriptive with colorful words employed...flows very well and has no apparent SPAG issues within. The artwork is quite attractive as well...great choice!

Thanks for sharing this, and all the best to you going forward with it!

With warm regards...

JMU

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thank you for the great review, I am glad you liked it. Also I appreciate the good wishes. :-)

Comment from allborn66

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem. It has a very inviting tone. You communicated your theme of friendship well. The word choice is strong.
Barbara

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Barbara, I appreciate all you have said. Thank you for reading
:-)

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

solid use of occasional rhyme and proximate rhyme
effective use of repeated lines
good alliteration in learn to love
and in follow me my friend
a most thoughtful and wise message of faith :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thank you Brooke, I like the last line you have written in your reply, that is what I hoped for. :-)

Comment from Thatguypk

Excellent

Not being a spiritual person does not blind me to the notion expressed here, that we are all the same in the eyes of God, who loves us all. Even without spirituality, I see the wisdom in recognising that we are all as special as the next person, and that mutual respect, and fellowship, is the positive solution to hatred. A well presented free verse.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thanks for such an insightful review. I am happy you found some value in Similarities. :-)

Comment from Lily Y

Excellent

I really thoroughly enjoyed reading and experiencing this piece. The artwork you have chosen also fits perfectly. You are conveying a wonderful yet unobtrusive message here. I think you are very skilled. I hope you consider my comments.-Lily

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thank you so much Lily, I do consider your comments and appreciate them very much. I am glad you enjoyed Similarities.

Comment from Nevermore713

Excellent

This poem flowed beautifully. I love how you incorporated your god into it, but you never came completely out with it. You left the mystery. Beautifully written. You truly have a gift.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thank you for the wonderful comments and rating. I am so glad you liked Similarities.

Comment from annatberry

Excellent

Well done, it was beautiful and lovely to read. You did a wonderful story in just a few words. I loved your picture it displayed your poem well.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2013

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reply by the author on 21-Oct-2013

Thanks annatberry, I am glad you enjoyed Similarities. :-)