Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

So much in those few lines . But the words themselves are full of meaning.a great determination there.

Benny Beeharry

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2013

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2013

Thanks Bennie

Comment from 9999pool

Excellent

Send us to the moon and then to the stars and let us be a close-up stargazer among the stars.
Let us feel the ethereal realms in wondrous serene embrace.
Great write and well penned.
Cheerio, Rithcie. :)) Hugs.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013

I am delighted you enjoyed this one, it was an interesting one to write. Now you better look up 'Nineteen sixty two'. I don't think you read it yet. Hope you are having a great day, you are up early. I just had dinner, are you having your morning coffee or tea? :-) Carolyn

reply by 9999pool on 28-Aug-2013

Hi Carolyn,

I have reviewed the 1962, smiles. And it must have been received by you now. Wondering why it hadn't. My review was this one:

"Tune our Hearts"

"This is a truly beautiful poem. In just 4 lines with the syllable count of 1-9-6-2, your write had captured our thoughts of the beautiful tune played on our melodious heart strings to sing our praise to the King.
Our songs of praise for Him are truly brilliant and great in hymns.
Cheerio, lots of love and hugs, Ritchie. :))

P.S. You certainly can write the 1962 very well. Smiles."

Smiles, Ritchie. :))))

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2013

That isn't the one, the first one was actually titled 'nineteen sixty two'. Then I wrote 'Tune our hearts'. Yes I got this review and thought it was your, as usual, wonderful response. Love, Carolyn

reply by 9999pool on 28-Aug-2013

Ok. I will take a look later, smiles.
Cheerio, Ritchie. :))

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

What a beautiful message conveyed with simplicity and grace. I very much enjoyed the read. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2013

And thank you for reading and enjoying this one, :-) Carolyn

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

Your poem is in excellent ABC Poem form
good alliteration in beyond belief
I like your strong verb choices like catapult and embrace that add to the power and emotion of the poem
Brooke :-)

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2013

Thanks Brooke, I appreciate your wonderful review and comments. I am enjoying trying out all the forms I come across. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Tomes Johnston

Excellent

We would all love to be catapulted to the stars. We just need to find that somebody in our lives who inspires us or even drives us on in our quest to be the best that we possibly can for them.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

Yes, motivation is always a key factor:-) Tomes, I am pleased you enjoyed this one. Carolyn

reply by Tomes Johnston on 26-Aug-2013

Yes I did. Take care,

Tom.

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes this is well written my friend so much imagery enclosed in is very beautiful I enjoyed well done and good luck regards Jill

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

Thanks Jill, I am happy you enjoyed this one. :-) Carolyn

Comment from Bundhoo

Excellent

Great ! Great ! Great !
I love your poetry ! also the title is awesome !For me your poem creates maximum of effects with the minimum of words! Regards,
Bundhoo;)

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

Hi there and thank you so much for your kind remarks, :-) Carolyn

reply by Bundhoo on 26-Aug-2013

You are WELCOME!;)

Comment from Maureen's Pen

Excellent

Dear Carolyn,
Your post is well penned ABC format. I especially loved your last line.

"Wondrous tranquility embrace" // I could feel the embrace, just lovely.
Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest.
Maureen

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

Thanks Maureen, I am so happy you could feel the embrace. Hugs are always good. (I've never won a contest, but I learn from each one I enter. :-) Glad you enjoyed this one, Love, Carolyn

Comment from david bell

Excellent

Thank you for this poem. I think that God gave us stars to help soothe our souls. Your well written words managed to bring me some peace.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

And I am so glad for that. If any of my poems bring a measure of peace and joy, then I am happy. Best to you always David, Carolyn

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A great entry. The opening verb hooked my attention. I love the image of ethereal realms. Only there can we forget our sorrows and become calm within. Nice assonance with increase and belief and disconsolate hour.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2013

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reply by the author on 25-Aug-2013

Thanks Shari, I appreciate such a thoughtful review. :-) Carolyn