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Want to be your lover

Lyrical poem

34 total reviews 
Comment from tbacha58
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Oh whoa, Such a deep poem, passion respect , love, honesty, sharing appreciation, you are born to be who you became. Be so proud of yourself. You made it. God loves you and your family. Hugs Terry.

 Comment Written 07-Aug-2013


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2013
    Hi Terry,
    I am proud of the person I have changed to become... But like I've said I don't think it would have occurred if it wasn't for the beautiful woman at my side... Thank you so much you are a beautiful and kind soul... My Creator, my Guides and my Angels are always near, I do feel their presence in my life... Where once was dark, now is light.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James xx
Comment from mizzkris20
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Wow! James, this is just beautiful and well worthy of my six star rating. I wish I could give it a ten star rating. I wish you and your wife many more years together

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2013


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2013
    Hi Kris,
    so, it's really you that are the romantic? How do I thank you for your generous rating? You didn't have to waste it on me... Just you coming in and doing these reviews are in themselves the only reward I need and I truly appreciate your kind heart for doing so.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James xx
Comment from MM lives on :)
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

James my brother of the ink and poetic genius...wow is my expression for this genius poem my friend, sorry haven't been on here for literally weeks and just renewed so I can review my friend James and other dear friends.

wow , what a sentimental poem of love..30 years, wow!

7 stars ! :)

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 21-Jun-2013
    Hi Christopher,
    you humble me with such wonderful comments and a truly outstanding review, I am glad you have renewed I miss that hint of metaphorical magic that you bring to the site... You are appreciated.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James
Comment from SteveY
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I bet you had all the female reviewers swooning over this one. Oh, yea, I guess you did, it's already an all time best. Huh, imagine that! Very nicely done my friend!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Hi SteveY,
    thank you my friend, this review was well received... Don't know about the swooning, but it seemed to get some reviews and good ratings. Thanks, I appreciate this.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James
Comment from Pullmanspb
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By explaining how long you and your wife have been together, that information made me really like and appreciate the poem. It felt too much like a poem of newly-in-love person and, to know the context, how wrong I was.

Steven

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2013
    Hi Steven,
    thank you so much for your fine review and excellent rating, it is most appreciated. Yeah, I love her, more now than when we first got together and I never thought that possible... Go figure eh!
    Kindest thoughts,
    James
Comment from ravenblack
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really, celebrate as if it is your 30th anniversary. my wife and I are approaching our tenth which in reality is our 16th. beautiful poem. now you don't have to buy her a present ( of course you do). happy anniversary.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
    Hi Raven B.
    Thank you for your fine review and excellent rating, it is most appreciated. We had a great day-all-day, so thanks for your kind sentiments...where Did all those yeas go?
    Kindest thoughts
    James
Comment from jmdg1954
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Jumbo... This is beautiful. I am happy to read that you're married 23 years. Bravo... I recently celebrated 34. At times that road has been difficult because of me, but she's my rock. Now that I just wrote reminds me, I should tell her that. Thank you James.
Another poem well penned my friend!! John

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
    Hi John,
    yeah, my friend what would we do without their love,after this long a journey together? We should remind them all the time how much they mean to us, in every way... Go on, yeah right now... Tell her how much you love her. Are you still sitting there? Get off the computer walk over an give her that hug! 34 years? Really give her another hug, just for the sake of that!
    Thank you for another fine review, it's always a pleasure to see your name appear.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James
Comment from donette1914
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so romantic of 23 years and 30 years together and in the words I can see how much your in love. very well done and very heart felt it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2013
    Hi Donette,
    thank you so much for your kind words and wonderful review, it is most appreciated. Yes I do love her more now than ever before, and I didn't even think that possible.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James xx
Comment from in777wr#
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A wonderful poem. The words flows well. Well written. This poem has a good rhythm to it. The message is clear. A wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Hi In 777,
    thank you for dropping by and leaving a wonderful present in the form of this review and the stars that accompany it, most appreciated.
    Kindest thoughts,
    James
Comment from Maureen's Pen
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Hi James, so beautiful to read and congrats on that wonderful knowing within you both share love - yet I know it is the deepest of love's truth, and a rare find as well.
I thought this was overflowing with your heart.
Great work and thanks for sharing it. Lots of congratulations and love to you both from me:)
Maureen

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2013


reply by the author on 16-Jun-2013
    Hi Maureen,
    thank you my dear friend for all the well wishes, Jade and I appreciate it very much.
    Also thank you for this wonderful review. Hope home is treating you right and freedom is working its magic.
    Always in my thoughts.
    Love, light and healing,
    James xxxxx