Reigniting Your Flame of Youth
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Main Causes of Old Age"Physical, and mental self-theropy.
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Comment from gabriowl
Your voice speaks very clearly throughout the whole passage. It was very easy to understand, and the points are made well. I didn't see any editing issues at all. Well done!
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Your voice speaks very clearly throughout the whole passage. It was very easy to understand, and the points are made well. I didn't see any editing issues at all. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2010
Comment from adewpearl
I must say that while I have thought about how abuse damages the body - things like smoking and drinking, both which I have never done, I have never thought of exercising the internal organs, like the lymph system. It will be interesting to read about how to do this :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2010
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I must say that while I have thought about how abuse damages the body - things like smoking and drinking, both which I have never done, I have never thought of exercising the internal organs, like the lymph system. It will be interesting to read about how to do this :-) Brooke
Comment Written 21-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2010
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Thank you so much for your help on my editing. You are always willing to lend me a helping hand.
Your Friend, Danny
Comment from patwannabe
knowledge, It looks like you might have something here. I just finished a contest with a poem about the different organs complaining about all the junk food coming down the path and the heart tells the other complaining organs, "I quit" and did. It was labeled "humor" but really wasn't. Nothing funny about it. Anyhow, I'm interested in what you have to say and looking forward to your next chapter. pat
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knowledge, It looks like you might have something here. I just finished a contest with a poem about the different organs complaining about all the junk food coming down the path and the heart tells the other complaining organs, "I quit" and did. It was labeled "humor" but really wasn't. Nothing funny about it. Anyhow, I'm interested in what you have to say and looking forward to your next chapter. pat
Comment Written 20-Jul-2010
Comment from Changeisgood
Knowledge, I wish every teenager who's caught up in a peer group and about to indulge would read this. It is valuable information. The swelling of the lymph nodes is often the first symptom of a hidden systemic disease like cancer.
Your writing is easy to understand, not simplistic though. It is to the point and informative. Changeisgood
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Knowledge, I wish every teenager who's caught up in a peer group and about to indulge would read this. It is valuable information. The swelling of the lymph nodes is often the first symptom of a hidden systemic disease like cancer.
Your writing is easy to understand, not simplistic though. It is to the point and informative. Changeisgood
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for educating us on our glands. I now know why I get compliments for looking younger than I really am. I don't put all that garbage into my body that a lot of people do.
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Thank you for educating us on our glands. I now know why I get compliments for looking younger than I really am. I don't put all that garbage into my body that a lot of people do.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from missy98writer
Knowledge,
your non-fiction about our bodies and health is very well written. Wonderful narrative with a good conversational note. It's so true about your lymph glands. I have Lymphadema in both legs and have to get them massaged and wrapped once a week. I used to have it done twice a week. I enjoyed reading your self improvement non-fiction. Beautiful art work you used.
Melissa.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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Knowledge,
your non-fiction about our bodies and health is very well written. Wonderful narrative with a good conversational note. It's so true about your lymph glands. I have Lymphadema in both legs and have to get them massaged and wrapped once a week. I used to have it done twice a week. I enjoyed reading your self improvement non-fiction. Beautiful art work you used.
Melissa.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2010
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You pay attention to these lessons. Once a week is not enough. Try rubbing them with natural Aloe Heat Lotion
daily. You can find it in almost any natural herb store.
Your Friend Danny
Comment from c_lucas
This goes along with the theory most illnesses are caused by violation of the digestive system. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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This goes along with the theory most illnesses are caused by violation of the digestive system. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from stroy79
To me this is the greatest piece of information.
We are our own worst enemy, killing ourselves
Smoking ,using drugs clogging our system so it cannot function properly. We are given three scores an ten
enen more with proper care of our body.
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To me this is the greatest piece of information.
We are our own worst enemy, killing ourselves
Smoking ,using drugs clogging our system so it cannot function properly. We are given three scores an ten
enen more with proper care of our body.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from fairy77
That was very interesting about the lymph glands.I have aging parents who I will educate.I only drink on special occasions and I try to exercise.I hope there will be a continuation of this or perhaps a website?The grammar was excellent, layout great ,keep doing what your doing cause there a lot of us who need to be educated.Nice work it doesn't quite apply to me I'm only 33.But it will soon enough LOL Beth
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That was very interesting about the lymph glands.I have aging parents who I will educate.I only drink on special occasions and I try to exercise.I hope there will be a continuation of this or perhaps a website?The grammar was excellent, layout great ,keep doing what your doing cause there a lot of us who need to be educated.Nice work it doesn't quite apply to me I'm only 33.But it will soon enough LOL Beth
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010
Comment from Isaiah Ramesses
An informative chapter in reference of our organs and anatomy. I found no errors and think that your narration flowed really well. Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
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An informative chapter in reference of our organs and anatomy. I found no errors and think that your narration flowed really well. Good job.
Isaiah Ramesses
Comment Written 19-Jul-2010