Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I like this very much! Original and eye-catching image (well-done) which you skilfully complement with a fluent and beautifully rhyming 1-6-1 verse. A proper job! Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 09-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thank you for the great review, Debbie. I always love messing around in my art program to come up with pictures for what I'm writing. I really appreciate the stars and stop in, Debbie. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.

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Ron

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is so much fun. I love how you twist words together. It's clever and I couldn't help but smile while reading it! Keep it up - your wordplay is really fun!

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thank you for the great review, Michael. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

Ron

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a very trebly written 161 for the contest and I wish you the very best of the contest. The thing that I find clever about it is how that you rhymed the three lines and they are rhymes that do not seem to be forced. Patricia.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025

Thank you for the great review, Patricia. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.

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Ron