His Silence
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Well, everything worked out for everyone except Noah. I presume this is the end. How come you don't answer questions from reviewers or return the reviewing?
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Well, everything worked out for everyone except Noah. I presume this is the end. How come you don't answer questions from reviewers or return the reviewing?
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it. I do respond to questions but sometimes I don't always have the time.
Comment from Begin Again
Fantastic job, Jacob...I would like to see Danielle and Harvey heal themselves by putting RAven House to some good use to help people... in the right way.... like those who ended up there because they had no where to go. Tough situation to recover from. You did it very well.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Fantastic job, Jacob...I would like to see Danielle and Harvey heal themselves by putting RAven House to some good use to help people... in the right way.... like those who ended up there because they had no where to go. Tough situation to recover from. You did it very well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Emma and Michael are amazing people for all they've been through and will take in Harvey as long as he needs it. I am really enjoying this story. A few more issues to wrap up and it's the end.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Emma and Michael are amazing people for all they've been through and will take in Harvey as long as he needs it. I am really enjoying this story. A few more issues to wrap up and it's the end.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Jacob, Oliver didn't die did he? There's this repeated reference to the house being 'left' to Danielle,suggesting he did. This well-constructed chapter pulls more strands together in a very satisfactory way. I like the way you put context into 20 years ago which is a nice touch. Thank you for sharing this excellent read. Do you know I still think about that initial horror of Danielle in the wardrobe - very memorable and an impressive start to this crime story? Take care Debbie
get used to (the) thought of Oliver
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Jacob, Oliver didn't die did he? There's this repeated reference to the house being 'left' to Danielle,suggesting he did. This well-constructed chapter pulls more strands together in a very satisfactory way. I like the way you put context into 20 years ago which is a nice touch. Thank you for sharing this excellent read. Do you know I still think about that initial horror of Danielle in the wardrobe - very memorable and an impressive start to this crime story? Take care Debbie
get used to (the) thought of Oliver
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Hi Debbie, thank you. No Oliver didn't die, I might need to make that clearer, but he gave Danielle the house as his way of saying sorry to her so that she could start a new life. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Jacob,
This is a wonderful reunion between Danielle and her brother. It was great that she went undercover to get her brother set free.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Jacob,
This is a wonderful reunion between Danielle and her brother. It was great that she went undercover to get her brother set free.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome my friend.
Comment from samandlancelot
Hi Jacob,
Considering I haven't read other chapters in your book, you still brought me into the scene well with your descriptions and realistic dialogue. My only suggestion is to describe what Harvey smells like when Danielle breathes in his scent. It wouldn't be noteworthy if it's simply sweat like a runner would have. I would expect he would have showered before leaving prison. Is he afraid of this meeting? Since his hands are sweating and there's a cool breeze, I suspect he's nervous. Danielle is not sweating, so why are their responses different?
Of course, I don't know the rest of the story.
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Hi Jacob,
Considering I haven't read other chapters in your book, you still brought me into the scene well with your descriptions and realistic dialogue. My only suggestion is to describe what Harvey smells like when Danielle breathes in his scent. It wouldn't be noteworthy if it's simply sweat like a runner would have. I would expect he would have showered before leaving prison. Is he afraid of this meeting? Since his hands are sweating and there's a cool breeze, I suspect he's nervous. Danielle is not sweating, so why are their responses different?
Of course, I don't know the rest of the story.
Patricia
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Patricia, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
