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Worry

A poem

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Comment from kahpot
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Very well said, it can only make it harder for us to look forward if we continue to worry about what has passed, we must always look for brighter things for tomorrow, very well written, a wonderful message****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Kahpot, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mintybee
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This poem is a wise poem. Worry does blind us to possible positive scenarios, and worse, it blinds us to the fact that worry can't solve our problems anyway. We get fixated on things that may never be, and we miss the good things right in front of us. You put that so succinctly, so artfully in this very short poem. Well done.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Minty for these terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from judiverse
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So true. We often worry needlessly. We don't know what's in store for our future. It may be a pleasant surprise, or it might be bad news. Some say prepare for the worst. Pray for the best. I think I often worry needlessly, and it's a relief all your worry was for nothing. Excellent rhyme. judi

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Judi, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from lyenochka
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So true. Worry doesn't accomplish anything and yet we do worry for our loved ones because the future is so uncertain and there are so many new dangers in the world today. Thanks for the reminder, Roy!

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Helen, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from justafan
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Well now, Roy this is small by your standards but it packs a whimsical wallop.

Maybe I I should sing... no wait the world is not ready for that!!

Well done my friend

Always
Justafan of yours
Missy

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Missy, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from DonandVicki
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We need to give praise to God for all things, the road isn't always smooth, but it is the road that God gave us to travel. As you said in your notes; "do not lean on your own understanding.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks D&V for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Samantha Wymer
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Beautiful poem about worrying bringing you down. All worrying does it make a person weary, but your beautiful poem and Bible verses in your eyes is a wonderful reminder. Merry Christmas Roy.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Samantha, for these excellent comments and great review, blessings Roy
Comment from ESOSTINE
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I have come to know in time that worry create worries, and becloud the brain, making it difficult to coordinate and see clearly. Well done, dear Roy. Thanks for sharing your inspiration.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from RJ Heritage
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We who trust in yhe Lord should not worry as much as those who have no faith. God leads us by His holy spirit, and through the king Jesus Christ. Let us live,as though we really believe.
RJ

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks RJ, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Teri7
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Roy, This is a very well written and very true poem you have penned. I love those two scriptures. Those two I can truly rely on. May God bless you and your family in this Christmas season! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2024
    Thanks Teri, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy