Santas Dilemma
I wonder if Santa will have this dilemma this year19 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
This is very clever and well done. A little drama followed by a little magic, wrapped in love. If I had been that kid, I wouldn't too happy either--until I opened up the gifts from Santa, Merry Christmas. Terry.
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This is very clever and well done. A little drama followed by a little magic, wrapped in love. If I had been that kid, I wouldn't too happy either--until I opened up the gifts from Santa, Merry Christmas. Terry.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is a fun Christmas poem to mark your 50 milestone of posting.
I hope your Christmas is as jolly as your rendition of the fat man and his sleigh.
Thank you for sharing
Tim
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This is a fun Christmas poem to mark your 50 milestone of posting.
I hope your Christmas is as jolly as your rendition of the fat man and his sleigh.
Thank you for sharing
Tim
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from Lana Marie
That was so sweet! I could picture Santa being so quiet when he went upstairs and saw a little boy. That smart little guy, figured out a way to see Santa.
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That was so sweet! I could picture Santa being so quiet when he went upstairs and saw a little boy. That smart little guy, figured out a way to see Santa.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2024
Comment from artisart4u
Santa's answer kept hope.
It was a decision he had to instantly make.
Your title should be Santa's Delimma meaning the apostrophe should be used to indicate that the delimma belongs to Santa. It is called a positive noun.
Congratulations on being Recognized and Post Number 50.
Good luck with your Christmas poem.
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Santa's answer kept hope.
It was a decision he had to instantly make.
Your title should be Santa's Delimma meaning the apostrophe should be used to indicate that the delimma belongs to Santa. It is called a positive noun.
Congratulations on being Recognized and Post Number 50.
Good luck with your Christmas poem.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from Trina Layne
This was fun reading for me. I think a young audience would appreciate it even more. Do you write children's books? If you could get the illustrations done, I would say you should consider it.
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This was fun reading for me. I think a young audience would appreciate it even more. Do you write children's books? If you could get the illustrations done, I would say you should consider it.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
Comment from jake cosmos aller
I liked this poem about Santa encountering a young boy who was waiting for him. Santa operates in secret and puts the boy back to sleep then continues on his journey.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I liked this poem about Santa encountering a young boy who was waiting for him. Santa operates in secret and puts the boy back to sleep then continues on his journey.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Sugarray77
I enjoyed reading this delightful poem!! Your lovely imagination infused this verse with a lighthearted lilt. Great job on end rhymes and the lovely flow of thought and style. Well done. And Congrats on posting 50 poems!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed reading this delightful poem!! Your lovely imagination infused this verse with a lighthearted lilt. Great job on end rhymes and the lovely flow of thought and style. Well done. And Congrats on posting 50 poems!!
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Thank you for your kind comments
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations, Beejay, on your milestone 50th! I enjoyed the originality of this Santa verse and wondered how this was going to evolve. A nice little twist at the end ensured that the little boy would attribute Santa's visit to a dream and the fairytale wouldn't be immediately curtailed. Enjoyable rhyming in a fluent form which sustained my interest. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Congratulations, Beejay, on your milestone 50th! I enjoyed the originality of this Santa verse and wondered how this was going to evolve. A nice little twist at the end ensured that the little boy would attribute Santa's visit to a dream and the fairytale wouldn't be immediately curtailed. Enjoyable rhyming in a fluent form which sustained my interest. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Many thanks for your kind review.
Comment from pookietoo
So this is your 50th post. I love it, very clever. Keep up the great work. Best wishes to you. Happy holidays and keep smiling. Have a great day. Enjoy your life
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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So this is your 50th post. I love it, very clever. Keep up the great work. Best wishes to you. Happy holidays and keep smiling. Have a great day. Enjoy your life
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Many thanks fir your six star review. Very kind of you.
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You are welcome,
Comment from Sanku
Very interesting anecdote about Santa's journey .Kids will be awake full of expectations. but closing the eyes is the important thing.. That is faith .without that there is no magic
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Very interesting anecdote about Santa's journey .Kids will be awake full of expectations. but closing the eyes is the important thing.. That is faith .without that there is no magic
Comment Written 22-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2024
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Many thanks for your review.