Miracles
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Miracles - Chap 4"From the ashes of crime, miracles arise
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Some dreams can take us around the world, be the most fun and entertaining, or take us to places in our bodies and minds. Others can just scare the heck out of us. Thanks for sharing.
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Some dreams can take us around the world, be the most fun and entertaining, or take us to places in our bodies and minds. Others can just scare the heck out of us. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
Comment from karenina
I'm happy...Garth's back. (smile)
So... this illness Jenna is displaying. Is it me or does this closely mimic the symptoms of morning sickness? Wouldn't that be a complication of major circumstances? There was the rape, after all. The jury is out on Rebecca. If she seems like an angel, she may be switch-hitting... Your plot twists are always phenomenal! Onward!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I'm happy...Garth's back. (smile)
So... this illness Jenna is displaying. Is it me or does this closely mimic the symptoms of morning sickness? Wouldn't that be a complication of major circumstances? There was the rape, after all. The jury is out on Rebecca. If she seems like an angel, she may be switch-hitting... Your plot twists are always phenomenal! Onward!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Rebecca will play an important part in the story but of course I'm not going to reveal whether that's good or bad. That wouldn't be any fun now would it?
Smiles, Carol
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For sure...keep me guessing. That's what you do best and it's why I enjoy your writing so much.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Jenna's secret will keep haunting her, as it is now in her nightmares and her waking hours. You do the tension and drama with a capital T and D, Carol. Goding great with this book challenge,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Jenna's secret will keep haunting her, as it is now in her nightmares and her waking hours. You do the tension and drama with a capital T and D, Carol. Goding great with this book challenge,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Good day, Valda! Hope all is well with you. I am thrilled to see you enjoyed another chapter of my book. Thanks so much for reading and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Jenna's illness is making me nervous, especially coupled with her horrible dreams of rape. I'm also uncomfortable with Rebecca. She seems so perfect as an assistant, but life is never perfect, and you have a way of reflecting that in your stories. I don't know what is going to happen. I just know you have something up your sleeves.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Jenna's illness is making me nervous, especially coupled with her horrible dreams of rape. I'm also uncomfortable with Rebecca. She seems so perfect as an assistant, but life is never perfect, and you have a way of reflecting that in your stories. I don't know what is going to happen. I just know you have something up your sleeves.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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What's about to happen might knock your socks off! Hope you are prepared for all of this drama! Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
So, Jenna now knows thst the love of her life is also a target of John Doyle, super nasty man, I can't conceive of someone as malevolent as he is. But anyway, Danni has been given her wings, so to speak, by the mysterious council, well done Carol, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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So, Jenna now knows thst the love of her life is also a target of John Doyle, super nasty man, I can't conceive of someone as malevolent as he is. But anyway, Danni has been given her wings, so to speak, by the mysterious council, well done Carol, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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No Doyle is despicable and deserves all the worst of the worst to happen to him, but currently money does a lot of talking for him. I can't wait for his day to come.
Smiles, Carol
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A great villian
Comment from Tim Margetts
I am, as you well know, loving this story.
You are keeping the pace going and the intrigue is building up nicely within me. I want the judge to totally come to a cropper for all he has done.
Am I cruel for thinking that I hope he gets deaded?
Looking forward to reading the next Chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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I am, as you well know, loving this story.
You are keeping the pace going and the intrigue is building up nicely within me. I want the judge to totally come to a cropper for all he has done.
Am I cruel for thinking that I hope he gets deaded?
Looking forward to reading the next Chapter.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Tim....The story is building to one of its crescendos and I hope you can hold on tight for the ride. LOL It's a roller coaster for sure.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from marilyn quillen
really good, i'm hooked like a fish and i just keep coming back for more!So I'll make a deal with you... you keep writing and I'll keep reading. i don't know where you come up with all your story lines, you must have a muse that follows you around
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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really good, i'm hooked like a fish and i just keep coming back for more!So I'll make a deal with you... you keep writing and I'll keep reading. i don't know where you come up with all your story lines, you must have a muse that follows you around
Comment Written 05-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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It's 3 a.m. and I can't sleep, so I sit at my computer. Grateful that you are putting a smile on my face. I write so others will enjoy and I am blessed that you do just that. Thank you so much. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
It is a good thing that Jenna has hired some help. You should add Rebecca and Danni to your Cast of Characters. Is Jenna actually ill or did something awful happen to her? That question alone adds interest to the plot. I would change this one word: Of course, she (is), honey.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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It is a good thing that Jenna has hired some help. You should add Rebecca and Danni to your Cast of Characters. Is Jenna actually ill or did something awful happen to her? That question alone adds interest to the plot. I would change this one word: Of course, she (is), honey.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thanks for reminding me about the character list. Good one! Yes, Jenna is going to need some help dealing with her "illness" and a few other devastating things as well. And Rebecca is not only starting over in a new town but I think her past will be visiting too. Happy reading! Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Jenna is pregnant then ... and doubtless to the guy who raped her - and it sounds like Donatelli doesn't know about either situation. This will definitely complicate matters. Well done. Interesting story, and I am sure there will be plenty of twists and turns!
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Jenna is pregnant then ... and doubtless to the guy who raped her - and it sounds like Donatelli doesn't know about either situation. This will definitely complicate matters. Well done. Interesting story, and I am sure there will be plenty of twists and turns!
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Yes, twists and turns that will make us shiver and run for cover...maybe! It's not going to be smooth sailing for our favorite people. Thanks so much for reading and enjoying.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Esther Brown
Well written and riveting as usual. I need to go back and re-read like l always have to because I missed a bit. Knowing you keep writing and I come and go from this site at odd times. Congrads on your ranking!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Well written and riveting as usual. I need to go back and re-read like l always have to because I missed a bit. Knowing you keep writing and I come and go from this site at odd times. Congrads on your ranking!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2024
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Thanks, Esther. Yes, this one is going to be fast moving because of the time restriction of a month, but I hope that you stick with it and enjoy the story. Thank you as always.
Smiles, Carol