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Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Begin Again's Version"Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from lyenochka
Oh this is very different! And you made it all change from a food fight to a very happy dance off among friends. Enjoyed your uplifting party version, Carol!
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Oh this is very different! And you made it all change from a food fight to a very happy dance off among friends. Enjoyed your uplifting party version, Carol!
Comment Written 31-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2024
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Hmmm...I already answered you (or so I thought) but I guess I get to say hello again and thank you for reading my version of the party. Appreciate your review and thoughts. Have a wonderful November!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Haha! The strippers add a whole new dimension to the unmitigated chaos of this convention. And, true to form, the Fanstorians lap up anything thrown at them and treat it as a cue for more laughter, dancing and riotous behaviour. Goodness, there'll be some photos to share around by the time they get back to their rightful position in front of the computer. If that ever happens of course. A lovely, wild and wonderful write, Carol, I enjoyed reading. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Haha! The strippers add a whole new dimension to the unmitigated chaos of this convention. And, true to form, the Fanstorians lap up anything thrown at them and treat it as a cue for more laughter, dancing and riotous behaviour. Goodness, there'll be some photos to share around by the time they get back to their rightful position in front of the computer. If that ever happens of course. A lovely, wild and wonderful write, Carol, I enjoyed reading. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Don't miss "The Morning After" I posted...Couldn't resist carrying the fun on for one more day. I truly enjoyed Rachelle and Gretchen's invite. Everyone seemed to have fun.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from DonandVicki
Sounds like quite a party. You made quite a twist to the tale with the police officers. You certianly had me confused. I have heard of stripper parties like this.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Sounds like quite a party. You made quite a twist to the tale with the police officers. You certianly had me confused. I have heard of stripper parties like this.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Chippendales, I believe! Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my version of the party. I have just posted "The Morning After" because I was having so much fun I wasn't ready to let it go. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment from pome lover
well, I definitely think you'll be one of the winners. That is wild and wooly if I ever heard it. Cute and original and probably right up Rachelle's alley. From her past posts, I think Gretchen is a bit reserved, not that she doesn't have fun but, just well, more reserved. :)
Anyway, crazy, crazy. Good luck!
Katharine
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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well, I definitely think you'll be one of the winners. That is wild and wooly if I ever heard it. Cute and original and probably right up Rachelle's alley. From her past posts, I think Gretchen is a bit reserved, not that she doesn't have fun but, just well, more reserved. :)
Anyway, crazy, crazy. Good luck!
Katharine
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I'm the reserved one as well and can't believe that the minute I read that Gretchen had the police entering the room with a bullhorn...this is what came to mind. I am thrilled that you enjoyed it and I so appreciate the honor of your stars. Thanks so much, Katherine.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You're so welcome!
Comment from Ric Myworld
This seems to be a livelier FanStory bunch than those I've had the pleasure of getting to know. But as they say, "you never know what goes on behind closed doors" or what they'll do under the term of "what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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This seems to be a livelier FanStory bunch than those I've had the pleasure of getting to know. But as they say, "you never know what goes on behind closed doors" or what they'll do under the term of "what happens in Vegas, stays in Vegas. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Don't ask me how I went from police entering the room to strippers, but my muse must have be drunk on something...It did appear thought that there was lots of fun to be had. Thanks as always.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Carol, this was such a treat! I think I like your version the best of all I've read. Music, champagne, and strippers . . . sounds like a good night to me!
Thanks for providing the naughty fun to this story - and for finally removing Jane from the scene:-)
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Carol, this was such a treat! I think I like your version the best of all I've read. Music, champagne, and strippers . . . sounds like a good night to me!
Thanks for providing the naughty fun to this story - and for finally removing Jane from the scene:-)
xo
Pam
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks, Pam. I don't know how I went from the police to strippers, but my muse must have been drinking their champagne. LOL Glad you enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Though I did not get to go, I enjoyed your story the most.
Since this site is women heavy it is only fair that we got the strippers. Enjoy the week and Happy Halloween. Karen
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Though I did not get to go, I enjoyed your story the most.
Since this site is women heavy it is only fair that we got the strippers. Enjoy the week and Happy Halloween. Karen
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Happy Halloween to you, Karen. The strippers were far better than spooky vampires and such. Glad you enjoyed the story. Thank you so much.
Smiles, Carol
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I told Ric that I was sorry to miss seeing him up there on stage. Hubba Hubba. :-)
Comment from jmdg1954
Whoaaas...
Police, bullhorns, strippers, music, handcuffs... LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!
A great addition for the Powder Keg chapter. Each one has been do different yet they all have been so enjoyable. I guess Jane showed her true colors.
Great stuff,
John
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Whoaaas...
Police, bullhorns, strippers, music, handcuffs... LETS GET THIS PARTY STARTED!
A great addition for the Powder Keg chapter. Each one has been do different yet they all have been so enjoyable. I guess Jane showed her true colors.
Great stuff,
John
Comment Written 29-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Thanks John for stopping by to read my offering to the Powder Keg party. It was a lot of fun to write and see how everyone has enjoyed it.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from LJbutterfly
Male police officer strippers. You surely know how to liven up a party. You added fire to the party. I enjoyed imagining the disco music and the dancers. Plus, you got rid of Jane. Great story, and fun.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Male police officer strippers. You surely know how to liven up a party. You added fire to the party. I enjoyed imagining the disco music and the dancers. Plus, you got rid of Jane. Great story, and fun.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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The disco music was the best! I imagined dancing and having fun...The others can have the strippers. And maybe we could find some of the shrimp...you know, to keep our energy up. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello, Carol.
This story appears to be written by someone who has had a lot of experience in those situations. HAHAHAHA
The introduction of the friendly policeman steered the story in another direction. And of course, Jane lived down to her reputation as she ended up in the paddy wagon with the cop and the handcuffs.
Robert
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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Hello, Carol.
This story appears to be written by someone who has had a lot of experience in those situations. HAHAHAHA
The introduction of the friendly policeman steered the story in another direction. And of course, Jane lived down to her reputation as she ended up in the paddy wagon with the cop and the handcuffs.
Robert
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2024
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I doubt I know much about the strippers, but I can do event planning hands down since I did it for a living long ago. The idea was to have fun, and I think they definitely did. Thank you so much, Robert, for stopping by.
Smiles, Carol