Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is a beautiful and well-described poem! You use vivid imagery and strong words. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Soon, in the US, we are moving from Winter to Spring. Have a good day!

Alex

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thanks again, Alex. Have a good weekend.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Transitions, has the proper formatting, plus rhyme, and the word. The processes of color change are well described, and the sense of seasons is clear.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Feb-2024

Thanks, Bill.