Take Me Down
A Free Verse Love Poem21 total reviews
Comment from Beck Fenton
I love the feeling your poetry evokes of that wonderous tide of passion. Riding the waves is such an apt metaphor for years ago. Great job in
provoking thoughts of wonderous memories, now long ago, never forgotten.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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I love the feeling your poetry evokes of that wonderous tide of passion. Riding the waves is such an apt metaphor for years ago. Great job in
provoking thoughts of wonderous memories, now long ago, never forgotten.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo
Comment from Frank.92
This an incredible poem. The poet has spacial way od describing the power of love in ''I'm tethered to you in tempetous tides.... my body and breath, yours to take away''.
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This an incredible poem. The poet has spacial way od describing the power of love in ''I'm tethered to you in tempetous tides.... my body and breath, yours to take away''.
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Comment Written 16-Oct-2023
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, this is a nicely made free verse poem of one's intimate journey. You do a good job with the metaphors and use of shifting imagery to paint what your character is experiencing and the differences. I don't think the wall is needed, this is more romance than adult (there is nothing explicit), but your choice.
Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Hmm, this is a nicely made free verse poem of one's intimate journey. You do a good job with the metaphors and use of shifting imagery to paint what your character is experiencing and the differences. I don't think the wall is needed, this is more romance than adult (there is nothing explicit), but your choice.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much! I would have to agree with you. Yet, one never knows what some are "uncomfortable" with here? so I chose to play it safe. If I posted some of my actual erotic writes, I'd likely be banned.
Thanks for the awesome review!
Xo
Jess
Comment from Sally Law
This just sizzles, my friend. What a beautiful bride you are, and are still, and a lovimg couple. I'm so happy you have this and a beautiful set of girls. How blessed you are.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the love poetry contest.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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This just sizzles, my friend. What a beautiful bride you are, and are still, and a lovimg couple. I'm so happy you have this and a beautiful set of girls. How blessed you are.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the love poetry contest.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 15-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, my friend xoxo
Comment from karenina
Metaphorically sensual in the best possible way, Jessica! Passionate with not an iota of salaciousness.
You write with abandon!
As it should be!
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Metaphorically sensual in the best possible way, Jessica! Passionate with not an iota of salaciousness.
You write with abandon!
As it should be!
Karenina
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Karenina, thank you so much!! Means the world! Xoxo
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Sizzling!
:)
Comment from Hellyen
Wow I normally don't go for this type of poetry but.........You had me hook line and sinker from the start very well written. I would love to read more from you
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Wow I normally don't go for this type of poetry but.........You had me hook line and sinker from the start very well written. I would love to read more from you
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much, that truly means a lot.
Xo
Comment from Lordinajamjar
Jessica, this is a beautiful love poem. A thing of beauty. A love treasure.
It skillfully flows and drifts through calm and torrents.
Unsatiated desire and passions fired up for a long night.
Well done.
John
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Jessica, this is a beautiful love poem. A thing of beauty. A love treasure.
It skillfully flows and drifts through calm and torrents.
Unsatiated desire and passions fired up for a long night.
Well done.
John
Comment Written 14-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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John, I truly appreciate your encouraging comments and kind words. Thank you so much.
Xo
Jessica
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jessica,
Tempestuous tides imagery and description of what nearly everyone desires in life -an all consuming love. Your use of water, waves, sea and ocean imagery
is perfect.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Hello Jessica,
Tempestuous tides imagery and description of what nearly everyone desires in life -an all consuming love. Your use of water, waves, sea and ocean imagery
is perfect.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 14-Oct-2023
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Oh, thank you so much, Robert! That truly means the world!
Xo
Comment from BenThrone
Well this certainly perked up my day! This is a very passionate poem, suggestive without being smutty (not that there's anything wrong with the latter). Well done!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Well this certainly perked up my day! This is a very passionate poem, suggestive without being smutty (not that there's anything wrong with the latter). Well done!
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2023
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Thank you for this encouragement, Ben. I've penned my share of suggestive (and smutty) writes haha but I honestly have been hesitant to share anything too sensual here. Your comment is refreshing and so appreciated! As are the stars! Xo
Jess
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I certainly thought twice about posting ?How to Eat an Orange?, ?At the Library: Adult Edition?, and ?Think Baseball?, but went ahead and did it anyway and none of them seemed to generate much criticism. Although a few reviewers seemed to think the former really was about eating oranges, which, well, makes me sad for their partners lol. Sex is a part of the human experience. Why shouldn?t we write about it?
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I absolutely agree?
And how did I miss these!? I am going to have to visit your portfolio again, Ben! ;)
Comment from Boogienights
A very well written and sensual poem, I'm not sure it required a warning. It did get across all the emotions involved and the height of passion. A very wonderful contest, best of luck to you.
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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A very well written and sensual poem, I'm not sure it required a warning. It did get across all the emotions involved and the height of passion. A very wonderful contest, best of luck to you.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2023
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Thank you so much! Xo