Animal Antics
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Funny Nonsense Poem writing prompt Contest.
It's so cute, I think children will like it too.
You grasped the form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Excellent entry for the Funny Nonsense Poem writing prompt Contest.
It's so cute, I think children will like it too.
You grasped the form well. Nice presentation. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
A fun children's poem for this contest entry - I can imagine that a child reading and imagining this would be a delight for them.
Nice rhymes and good image are included here. Best of luck.
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A fun children's poem for this contest entry - I can imagine that a child reading and imagining this would be a delight for them.
Nice rhymes and good image are included here. Best of luck.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from pookietoo
This poem is quite cute and funny. I enjoyed reading it. I wish us both good luck in this contest. I hope you continue to write great poems such as this. Keep smiling. Best wishes to you.
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This poem is quite cute and funny. I enjoyed reading it. I wish us both good luck in this contest. I hope you continue to write great poems such as this. Keep smiling. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 30-Sep-2022
Comment from kahpot
How very clever, the animals' names as we know them do seem to fit-yet if they were different it would be very confusing, many smiles and messages in this read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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How very clever, the animals' names as we know them do seem to fit-yet if they were different it would be very confusing, many smiles and messages in this read, very well written, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 29-Sep-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Animal Antics, looks at the craziness that would be in play if animals were mashed up or switched with their natural idiosyncrasies. Roosters giving milk might be a bit exhaustive.
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This poem, Animal Antics, looks at the craziness that would be in play if animals were mashed up or switched with their natural idiosyncrasies. Roosters giving milk might be a bit exhaustive.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A neat concept carried out with humor. The images are clear and silly. The language is lilting. The poem stays on point. The rhymes are unforced.
Thanks for a good read.
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A neat concept carried out with humor. The images are clear and silly. The language is lilting. The poem stays on point. The rhymes are unforced.
Thanks for a good read.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2022