Oh My!
A young fellow's relationships.39 total reviews
Comment from amahra
LOL! What a well-written and amusing story. I loved it, especially at the end. OMG! I never saw that coming. I wish I could write funny. I really enjoyed this. Great job!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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LOL! What a well-written and amusing story. I loved it, especially at the end. OMG! I never saw that coming. I wish I could write funny. I really enjoyed this. Great job!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading my little humorous story. I am glad you enjoyed it. Terry.
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've been trying to save my last six for that special story that puts a smile on my face. So, tag you're it. What a great job of keeping that last line hidden until the very end. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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I've been trying to save my last six for that special story that puts a smile on my face. So, tag you're it. What a great job of keeping that last line hidden until the very end. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Ric, thank you for the six stars! I love your review, Thank you, Terry.
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It's always a pleasure to read your work and communicate with you!
Comment from lavendermoon14
This work is very unique. I really loved the connection from the beginning to the end. I was captured in this piece from the beginning to the end. Your writing style is incredibly pleasing to read. Thank you so much for sharing this. Definitely got a chuckle out of me at the end.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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This work is very unique. I really loved the connection from the beginning to the end. I was captured in this piece from the beginning to the end. Your writing style is incredibly pleasing to read. Thank you so much for sharing this. Definitely got a chuckle out of me at the end.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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LOL, Rachel, I love your review, Thank you for reading, Terry.
Comment from WLHall
Of course Cooper made up how he met "Dr. Balew" for his mother. I really didn't see that twist coming. A brilliant and humorous read with natural flow. When I read it again, knowing the ending, the set up information was obvious then. Enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Of course Cooper made up how he met "Dr. Balew" for his mother. I really didn't see that twist coming. A brilliant and humorous read with natural flow. When I read it again, knowing the ending, the set up information was obvious then. Enjoyable read.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your fun review! Terry.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Terry,
what a great story. You have quite the imagination. I had no idea where this was going. I liked both the way you started it and the way you ended it. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Hello Terry,
what a great story. You have quite the imagination. I had no idea where this was going. I liked both the way you started it and the way you ended it. Well done.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Tom, thank you for reading and for your review! Terry.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is amusing. So, he asked a hooker for help and called her his doctor. She had the right answer and a very good suggestion. He had the smarts to pick a really good job. No trouble in their paradise.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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This is amusing. So, he asked a hooker for help and called her his doctor. She had the right answer and a very good suggestion. He had the smarts to pick a really good job. No trouble in their paradise.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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LOL, Carol, thank you for reading and reviewing! Terry.
Comment from Tpa
Another great story from what seems to be your treasure of entertaining stories.Cooper seems like the average guy meeting the right guy as did Rachel. very well written.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Another great story from what seems to be your treasure of entertaining stories.Cooper seems like the average guy meeting the right guy as did Rachel. very well written.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading and your kind review! Terry.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Terry, you naughty writer. I can always count on you to put an unexpected twist on your stories. That twist is the cheery on top of the sundae in reading your writing. Since your writings are longer than most poems, I appreciate the large, easy to read text. As for the visual, I don't get it. Once again well-done work.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Terry, you naughty writer. I can always count on you to put an unexpected twist on your stories. That twist is the cheery on top of the sundae in reading your writing. Since your writings are longer than most poems, I appreciate the large, easy to read text. As for the visual, I don't get it. Once again well-done work.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Sandra, thank you for reading, love your new picture. The visual I used is an impressionist picture of beautiful woman with searing green eyes, like the eyes of Rachel in the story. The artist's first name is Cindy...Cindy in the story. Terry.
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You are welcome. There is always a rhyme or reason for a thinking person. Cool!
The profile pic is a younger version of me.
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Terry, very good, very cute. They say that everything we write has a little of ourself is in it? So, what part of this story is you - lol. I enjoyed reading your story. You pulled me into the story and you pulled the wool over the my eyes. I didn't see the ending come, and I should have because It'll Do Till It Won't was mentioned earlier in the story. A fun story.
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Hello Terry, very good, very cute. They say that everything we write has a little of ourself is in it? So, what part of this story is you - lol. I enjoyed reading your story. You pulled me into the story and you pulled the wool over the my eyes. I didn't see the ending come, and I should have because It'll Do Till It Won't was mentioned earlier in the story. A fun story.
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Margaret, LOL, I am delighted you enjoyed my little humorous story! Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from leather
Oh my! My head was spinning after reading this and trying to keep everything straight and in the proper timeline. It's an intricate story and had to take some effort to complete.
Best wishes.
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Oh my! My head was spinning after reading this and trying to keep everything straight and in the proper timeline. It's an intricate story and had to take some effort to complete.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022