Daddy's girl
Such fun, being ...23 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Wendy,It seems this is a loving dad who lets his daughter's imagination free during play time. It seems like she thinks Mom is the task master at this time. This may change as she gets older.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Wendy,It seems this is a loving dad who lets his daughter's imagination free during play time. It seems like she thinks Mom is the task master at this time. This may change as she gets older.
Congrats on the honorable mention in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thank you very much. Lovely review. Her mother is great fun too, but perhaps not quite as exuberant as her father. I wrote it based on my son, who often plays like this with his three little girls (6, 4 and 1).
Wendy
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You are most kindly welcome welcome.
I can understand that. Mothers aren't usually strong of brave enough to though their child up in the air and catch them like fathers can.
Joan
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Congratulations on the recognition, Wendy, for your children's poem. This is a lovely piece - reminds me so much of the relationship my daughter had with her daddy. They're still very close.
Have a great day.
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Congratulations on the recognition, Wendy, for your children's poem. This is a lovely piece - reminds me so much of the relationship my daughter had with her daddy. They're still very close.
Have a great day.
Comment Written 29-May-2022
reply by the author on 29-May-2022
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Thank you Pam. I didn?t even realise till I read your review!! Lovely news and lovely review. My son plays like this with his three little girls. It?s lovely to watch.
Thank you again.
Wendy
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem for kids. It has. Great flow and rhyme. My Daddy's always my Number One!
Mummy now says it's nearly time for bed ...
Daddy tells me fun stories - or a rhyme instead!Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem for kids. It has. Great flow and rhyme. My Daddy's always my Number One!
Mummy now says it's nearly time for bed ...
Daddy tells me fun stories - or a rhyme instead!Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much Joanne! I appreciate very much the Exceptional rating, and the good wishes. Six stars are always very precious. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Wendy
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively written, vividly descriptive of a great father-daughter relationship, and delightful--such fun!
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Your poem is excellent in every respect--skillfully and creatively written, vividly descriptive of a great father-daughter relationship, and delightful--such fun!
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 24-May-2022
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Thank you Janice for this lovely review - I am very glad you enjoyed it. Your words are very encouraging!
Wendy
Comment from Wayne Fowler
I like it, and I'm not even a child (though my wife accuses me of being one with every Ohmie story).
I'm an actin sort of person, maybe that's why this one appeals to me so.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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I like it, and I'm not even a child (though my wife accuses me of being one with every Ohmie story).
I'm an actin sort of person, maybe that's why this one appeals to me so.
Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thanks so much Wayne,for your words and for your good wishes. I am thrilled to get the Exceptional rating and six stars. Many thanks.
My son plays like this with his three little girls - it's lovely to watch.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
Yes I did all these things with my girls, they are still incredibly special but they're grown up now, then is starts all over again with the next generation, this is a fantastic pistol, telling all the things that ate all part of a sound relationship, great rhyme, flow and language Wendy, blessings and good luck, Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Yes I did all these things with my girls, they are still incredibly special but they're grown up now, then is starts all over again with the next generation, this is a fantastic pistol, telling all the things that ate all part of a sound relationship, great rhyme, flow and language Wendy, blessings and good luck, Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Roy for your very encouraging comments. Always appreciated.
Wendy
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Most welcome
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this children's poetry contest entry with us. I was such a daddy's girl growing up. I completely enjoy watching my granddaughters wrap their daddies around their fingers. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this children's poetry contest entry with us. I was such a daddy's girl growing up. I completely enjoy watching my granddaughters wrap their daddies around their fingers. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you Barbara. My so plays with his three daughters just like this. It?s lovely to see.
Wendy
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this children's poem. Great rhyming and well-chosen words to describe a little girl's fun with her dad. We only had one daughter, and she certainly was Daddy's girl..
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Well done on this children's poem. Great rhyming and well-chosen words to describe a little girl's fun with her dad. We only had one daughter, and she certainly was Daddy's girl..
Comment Written 23-May-2022
reply by the author on 23-May-2022
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Thank you very much Anne. I certainly appreciate the six stars and value your rating highly. This one was prompted by my son who plays like this with his three little girls (6, 4 and 1) all the time. It?s lovely to watch. Thank you again.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy
Comment from Gert sherwood
Wendy
I had so much fun reading your poem for the
Children's Poetry Contest. The rhyming is pefect
I know one thing my daddy didn't like to turn me upside down.It makes me fee I missed that fun time. You I know made us fanstotians smile
I wish you the best in this contest
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Wendy
I had so much fun reading your poem for the
Children's Poetry Contest. The rhyming is pefect
I know one thing my daddy didn't like to turn me upside down.It makes me fee I missed that fun time. You I know made us fanstotians smile
I wish you the best in this contest
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Thank you Gert. My Dad never did anything like this - but my son plays like this all the time with his three little girls. They love it! I am so glad you enjoyed this one and it made you smile.
Wendy
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You are mot welcome
Comment from lyenochka
What a fun daddy-daughter relationship at play! You describe the fun the young dads have with their little ones. I feel sorry for the mommy who seems to be the taskmaster reminding them it's time for bed. She was probably doing all the hard work in the background.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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What a fun daddy-daughter relationship at play! You describe the fun the young dads have with their little ones. I feel sorry for the mommy who seems to be the taskmaster reminding them it's time for bed. She was probably doing all the hard work in the background.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Yes, that is the case sometimes - and Dad gets them all hyped up just before bed-time! Thanks so much for reviewing. Always appreciated.
Wendy