Heart Crafted Poems - 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Staying the Course"Musings of an old man - 2022
17 total reviews
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Nicely done ABC poem about walking the spiritual path of life. Reminiscent in a way of the Pilgrim's progress. I like the way it flows along the spiritual path.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Nicely done ABC poem about walking the spiritual path of life. Reminiscent in a way of the Pilgrim's progress. I like the way it flows along the spiritual path.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2022
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Jake, thank you.
Comment from Sharon Davis
You have done an outstanding job with this Abercedarian poem.
It fulfills the technical aspects of the prompt and, more importantly, is filled with descriptive movement throughout.
An effective and enjoyable piece that captures and retains the reader's interest.
The image that accompanies the work is a perfect fit, highlighting the journey exposed in the poem.
Outstanding!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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You have done an outstanding job with this Abercedarian poem.
It fulfills the technical aspects of the prompt and, more importantly, is filled with descriptive movement throughout.
An effective and enjoyable piece that captures and retains the reader's interest.
The image that accompanies the work is a perfect fit, highlighting the journey exposed in the poem.
Outstanding!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Sharon, I am quite honored by your generous six star review!
Comment from nomi338
From A to Z, this poem held me. I anxiously read each line wondering what would be next. What a wonderful and inventive use of written text. I do not know if I could pull this off and do nearly as well. It is one thing to write a poem like this, but to do so and write intelligently while doing it, is quite another thing altogether. Congratulations.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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From A to Z, this poem held me. I anxiously read each line wondering what would be next. What a wonderful and inventive use of written text. I do not know if I could pull this off and do nearly as well. It is one thing to write a poem like this, but to do so and write intelligently while doing it, is quite another thing altogether. Congratulations.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you kind sir!
Comment from Bridge
Amazing ! You have done an excellent job. I love the x and z lines. Very well written. All the best to you in the contest. With regards and best wishes
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Amazing ! You have done an excellent job. I love the x and z lines. Very well written. All the best to you in the contest. With regards and best wishes
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Bridge, thank you so much!
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well done abecedarian poem. It shows how the beauty of the world creates peace and hope for a better tomorrow and gives strength to not let life's potholes stop you from your course.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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This is a well done abecedarian poem. It shows how the beauty of the world creates peace and hope for a better tomorrow and gives strength to not let life's potholes stop you from your course.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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much appreciation Joan, thank you!
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You are most kindly welcome.
Joan
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nicely done to the prompt. Many of the stanzas are autobiographical and tell about your journey through life. You also tell of the many pitfalls one will encounter in this journey.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Nicely done to the prompt. Many of the stanzas are autobiographical and tell about your journey through life. You also tell of the many pitfalls one will encounter in this journey.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Paul, you are a good chap! Thank you..
Comment from Boogienights
I find your poem very interesting and full of ideas, some if which resonates with me. It flowed beautifully and kept my attention. A very nicely done contest entry, thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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I find your poem very interesting and full of ideas, some if which resonates with me. It flowed beautifully and kept my attention. A very nicely done contest entry, thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your engagement with this first time effort with this type of prompt.
Comment from royowen
This is a fine abecdarian poem, not only have you cleverly negotiated the 26 letters but you've completed them in a most articulate and in a uniquely artistic and skilfully adept way beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is a fine abecdarian poem, not only have you cleverly negotiated the 26 letters but you've completed them in a most articulate and in a uniquely artistic and skilfully adept way beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Thank you dear friend!
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Welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is an epic Abecedarian filled with faithful words and good advice about man's traits and how the past and the present meet within our spiritual journey in our effort to stay on the right path, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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This is an epic Abecedarian filled with faithful words and good advice about man's traits and how the past and the present meet within our spiritual journey in our effort to stay on the right path, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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I appreciate your comments, thank you!
Comment from Anne Johnston
Wish I had six stars left to give you for this. It is a beautiful story of your life using all the letters of the alphabet. I really like the lines: "Frighteningly, days came when I strode on a darker patch
God, however, knew my purpose and provided calm"
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Wish I had six stars left to give you for this. It is a beautiful story of your life using all the letters of the alphabet. I really like the lines: "Frighteningly, days came when I strode on a darker patch
God, however, knew my purpose and provided calm"
Comment Written 22-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2022
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Anne I will enjoy your virtual six. Thank you
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You are welcome