Friendship
Hard to find, harder to keep.6 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Yardier,
Congrats! on your 2nd place in the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest. This is a simply yet poignant write about the foundation of all love relationships. Your syllable count is spot on and the imagery is perfect for the story being told in this short write. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Yardier,
Congrats! on your 2nd place in the 25 Syllable Poem writing contest. This is a simply yet poignant write about the foundation of all love relationships. Your syllable count is spot on and the imagery is perfect for the story being told in this short write. Well done.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 06-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Eugene. I appreciate your review and wish you a good day.
Yard
Comment from Mark D. R.
Great thought for this contest. You captured the photo in your few words. Your second line is excellent phrasing.
The question is: Who will win the arm wrestle for the pie slice LOL
P.S. I would have preferred each segment to be one line rather than the two shown.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Great thought for this contest. You captured the photo in your few words. Your second line is excellent phrasing.
The question is: Who will win the arm wrestle for the pie slice LOL
P.S. I would have preferred each segment to be one line rather than the two shown.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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The author got the pie!
Thanks for the review and helpful suggestion. Yard
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I like this poem to a special person. One of the best attributes of a friend is listening. You stayed within the guidelines well. I love the picture--it
perfectly suits the words.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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I like this poem to a special person. One of the best attributes of a friend is listening. You stayed within the guidelines well. I love the picture--it
perfectly suits the words.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Verna!
Comment from in777wr#
This is a beautiful poem. Your syllable count is good. The poem flows well. There are no unnecessary words in this poem. The picture definitely compliments this poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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This is a beautiful poem. Your syllable count is good. The poem flows well. There are no unnecessary words in this poem. The picture definitely compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thanks again for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Raul1
Friends are the best people you could find. They help you anyway they can. I like your message you sent in this poem. Well told. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Friends are the best people you could find. They help you anyway they can. I like your message you sent in this poem. Well told. Excellent work! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Raul, for your review and insight. I'm glad you liked it. Yard.
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You're welcome!
Comment from jessizero
This is a great poem in only 25 syllables. I am impressed. You're right that good friends are hard to find. Thank you for sharing this work. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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This is a great poem in only 25 syllables. I am impressed. You're right that good friends are hard to find. Thank you for sharing this work. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2022
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Thank you, Ms. Jessi, for your review and insight. I'm glad you liked it. Yard.