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You Kin Bet Ya Butt.

Yo Bro, Guess What....

4 total reviews 
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This is an extremely amusing entry for the 25 syllable writing prompt. It is a witty thought anyway, but to pull it off in the exact syllable count without stuffer words or repetitions is smart.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2022

Comment from tempeste
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Ciao Rhonnie,

this is a very witty entry ..

I noticed that you are good at humour and at time even satire.

I lack both and often miss the meaning when people dish it out..but this one I got.

Take care Rhonnie.. How is the new computer ..I bought a new one too two weeks ago ..My old one was 9 years old and kepy crashing , had no choice .

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2022
    Ciao, Tempeste: I thank you for your comments and your complements in this matter. As usual...you are appreciated. When I was studying how to be comical I learned that the funniest comedy is when the joker can take a serious matter and make it laughable. So I made that one of my techniques.
    You are one of my favorite fans. I really enjoy making you smile. My son came over today and set my new computer in motion. I do remember that you told me when you got your new computer. Goody goody for ya. God bless you, my dear friend. Cordially...me.
Comment from jessizero
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And with that, you've said it all in only 25 syllables. Way to go! Keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing that work with FanStory. Best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022

Comment from poetwatch
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Truer words, as far as I know, have never been written, author. :) They may have been expressed and are known. We will live to the end of our life and come what may we can't get out of wherever will we be. This is a good entry for the 25 Syllable Word Contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2022