Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

This is another good poem for this prompt. I like the artwork that goes well with the subject of the prompt. All around goo presentation and entry.

Good luck.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 07-May-2015

Thanks Jackie for this lovely review and comments.

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Love
will draw its theme from Heaven's dreams
hate will sate on destruction's schemes
hate.

I like the order of your antonyms. Good choice of picture.

Good internal rhyme/end rhyme.

No changes. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

thanks for thegreat review and comments.

Comment from Maritza M. Mejia

Excellent

Excellent antonym love/hate. Two opposite endings of affection.
Great image and good lines.
Flow easily.
Great job.
Good luck!

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 Comment Written 06-May-2015

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reply by the author on 06-May-2015

thanks so much for the great review and comments.