Reign Knee Daze (Rainy Days)
A poem, just for the hell of it...127 total reviews
Comment from donnadiann
Wow, you put that scare in there, and I know I don't want to go to......Hate the devil. Reminding wake-up call, even though I was in church just yesterday. Every encouragement is welcome. The tone is harsh as it should be, and the rhyming lines flow well. Have a great week:) Really like the last line and picture.
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Wow, you put that scare in there, and I know I don't want to go to......Hate the devil. Reminding wake-up call, even though I was in church just yesterday. Every encouragement is welcome. The tone is harsh as it should be, and the rhyming lines flow well. Have a great week:) Really like the last line and picture.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Treischel
This is another masterpiece. A true battle of good versus evil, reminiscent of Christ's battle with Satin in the bible. It flowed beautifully with eloquent lines, lovely alliteration, incredible animations, and profound imagery. I was blown away. Read it it my wife too. She was blown away. Bravo!
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This is another masterpiece. A true battle of good versus evil, reminiscent of Christ's battle with Satin in the bible. It flowed beautifully with eloquent lines, lovely alliteration, incredible animations, and profound imagery. I was blown away. Read it it my wife too. She was blown away. Bravo!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Genya
Dean this was incredible. You really are a master at telling these deep dark stories and putting those underworld ideas into your poetry. Perfect in every way. The power of evil overcome by the mightier power as he sends the rain his soothing veil. Loved the pictures although your words said everything they needed to say. Just loved it. Amazing. Genya
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Dean this was incredible. You really are a master at telling these deep dark stories and putting those underworld ideas into your poetry. Perfect in every way. The power of evil overcome by the mightier power as he sends the rain his soothing veil. Loved the pictures although your words said everything they needed to say. Just loved it. Amazing. Genya
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job portraying the way the devil tempts us while we are at our weakest and lures us with the sin we have the most difficulty turning away.
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this is an excellent write, dean, you did an excellent job portraying the way the devil tempts us while we are at our weakest and lures us with the sin we have the most difficulty turning away.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from reconciled
hm now that is one gorgeous temptation....what do you figure is in that stewed potion he's manipulating in angst....I'm sure it taste dreadful. Hey Dean...-smile- spooky stuff man try not to eat anymore...haha...big love Michael
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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hm now that is one gorgeous temptation....what do you figure is in that stewed potion he's manipulating in angst....I'm sure it taste dreadful. Hey Dean...-smile- spooky stuff man try not to eat anymore...haha...big love Michael
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Ha-ha, well, Michael, I rarely eat now as it is, surviving on a rich, healthy diet of caffine and more caffine.
Thanks for the fabulous comments, and for taking time out to review this for me. It is appreciated! :}
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ahh Coca-Cola the juice of life...-wink-
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... and coffee, Michael. Lots and lots of hot, fresh black java, LOL...
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I know....I've always been a bit different...ahh well life is lived interesting....haha have great day-
Comment from krys123
Dean;
and possibly seven stars it's a right roundabout number.
Exceptionally well-written composition, superb tempo and meter, intense imagination that is demonstratively descriptive and expressive, marvelous story within a poem, tasty metaphorical phrase in simile type statements and most of all extremely and fascinatingly entertaining.
And besides the pictures that represent and complement your poem these are just but a few of probably many more I could complement your poem from what I've obtained from reading it.
Superb rhyming which was neither forced nor labored and helped with your rhythmic flow which flowed so intricately well throughout your writing.
I could begin to write down passages of your extremely imaginative, descriptive and expressive imagery but I think you basically know what you have written and understand what I mean: "and when that happens without fail, God sends the rain His soothing veil." This pretty much is summing up part of your poem an excellent ending to such a great writing.
Thank you for sharing and posting this being for everyone to read and when he got his start being recognized in the majority of the public eyes and be published in magazines like the New Yorker or some other well-known the affiliate.
This is best way I can explain you in your writing:
"you having manifested the knowledge, skill and experience needed for success in a particular field or endeavor such as poetry, is an asset to everyone.
Thank you for sharing and posting this my friend and may the Lord keep and bless you always.
Alex
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Dean;
and possibly seven stars it's a right roundabout number.
Exceptionally well-written composition, superb tempo and meter, intense imagination that is demonstratively descriptive and expressive, marvelous story within a poem, tasty metaphorical phrase in simile type statements and most of all extremely and fascinatingly entertaining.
And besides the pictures that represent and complement your poem these are just but a few of probably many more I could complement your poem from what I've obtained from reading it.
Superb rhyming which was neither forced nor labored and helped with your rhythmic flow which flowed so intricately well throughout your writing.
I could begin to write down passages of your extremely imaginative, descriptive and expressive imagery but I think you basically know what you have written and understand what I mean: "and when that happens without fail, God sends the rain His soothing veil." This pretty much is summing up part of your poem an excellent ending to such a great writing.
Thank you for sharing and posting this being for everyone to read and when he got his start being recognized in the majority of the public eyes and be published in magazines like the New Yorker or some other well-known the affiliate.
This is best way I can explain you in your writing:
"you having manifested the knowledge, skill and experience needed for success in a particular field or endeavor such as poetry, is an asset to everyone.
Thank you for sharing and posting this my friend and may the Lord keep and bless you always.
Alex
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am positive you need your meds changed or something! LOL Are your trying to make sure I NEVER sleep again? LOL
Great job of writing this poem.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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I am positive you need your meds changed or something! LOL Are your trying to make sure I NEVER sleep again? LOL
Great job of writing this poem.
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Hah-ha, no, Barbara. I have that problem myself, and I wouldn't wish that on anyone! LOL.
Thanks for the awesome comments. :}
Comment from Neonewman
I am standing in ovation at my computer as we speak Dean! This is simply perfection at its best, our dreams make for incredible inspiration. This masterfully crafted piece you have delivered young man, should be seen throughout the world. Bravo! Dean Kuch, Bravo!
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I am standing in ovation at my computer as we speak Dean! This is simply perfection at its best, our dreams make for incredible inspiration. This masterfully crafted piece you have delivered young man, should be seen throughout the world. Bravo! Dean Kuch, Bravo!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
Comment from Veeb
I'd be interested in knowing what you had for supper on Saturday night! LoL. Really, really great poem - love the format and the thunder - quite unexpected, but very effective. The preacher and old Mrs. Bailey made me smile - I think I had her in the fifth grade, actually! Great rhythm and a smooth flow - very lyrical. I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks. Sweet dreams!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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I'd be interested in knowing what you had for supper on Saturday night! LoL. Really, really great poem - love the format and the thunder - quite unexpected, but very effective. The preacher and old Mrs. Bailey made me smile - I think I had her in the fifth grade, actually! Great rhythm and a smooth flow - very lyrical. I enjoyed this immensely. Thanks. Sweet dreams!
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2014
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Thanks so much, Veeb. I really appreciate you taking time out to read and review this rather lengthy poem.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Wow Dean! What more to say. At first by the title I thought it would be about the pain in the knees from the weather:) I sure was wrong!
This had my hackles up right away. I think you described exactly how the devil must work.
Great piece of work. Keep taking those meds - lol!
Teresa
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Wow Dean! What more to say. At first by the title I thought it would be about the pain in the knees from the weather:) I sure was wrong!
This had my hackles up right away. I think you described exactly how the devil must work.
Great piece of work. Keep taking those meds - lol!
Teresa
Comment Written 10-Nov-2014