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Happy Birthday Angel

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Comment from IndianaIrish
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A moving, beautiful story, John. The emotion you convey can be felt by the reader ... both the love for your baby and the pain you felt as you held her. She is a lucky angel to have had you as her Dad.
Indy :>)
It was a pleasure to help with the MAS

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2011
    Indy, thank you so much for your help through and through, not just with the MAS, but with everything. Your words are comforting and I know written from the heart. WOW, thanks for the 6 star rating. JohnnyD
Comment from dinoscribe
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This is beautiful. A loving, lovely tribute.

I too have had little ones that have breathed just a few short breaths (3 Angels) but, just as you I too believe that I will meet them again in heaven.

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2011
    dinoscribe... my heart goes out to you for the loss of your 3 angels. It is a difficult and painstaking time. I hope you have been able to start a family and have your angels look after everyone. John
Comment from Deejharrington
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No one who has not experienced the loss of a child, can really understand what you and your wife went through. But you have done a wonderful job of expressing the love and grief. I know your faith has brought you this far and I hope it continues to comfort you. Someday, you'll hold your baby girl again.
Blessings
dj

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 23-Mar-2011
    dj, yes one day I will be able to hold her again. Thank you for reading and commenting on my story and for the comforting words... John
Comment from animatqua
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This story was both strong, and beautiful. The pain was palpable, but so was the strength of acceptance and faith.

I really felt this story.

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2011
    Thank you so much for reading, commenting and for your time. I appreciate it. John
Comment from Shirley B
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First, I want to say as a nurse you explained this beautifully and correctly. You made it easy for everyone to understand and feel the agony of your daughters death on you and your wife. You sound like such a loving father. I know your three other children are truly blessed. I am so glad you visit your daughter's grave. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, Shirley

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 Comment Written 22-Mar-2011


reply by the author on 22-Mar-2011
    Thank you Shirley for reading and commenting on my story. I truly appreciate your time. It was something I needed to for Kristen for her 30th birthday. John