Another Pretty Face
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Comment from missy98writer
Barbara,
your latest chapter is wonderfully written. I loved it. Sara's daughter is nosey about her kissing Joe. Here are some paragraphs that stood out:
Sara measured dough and placed it carefully on the cookie sheet. "I said it's none of your business." She turned toward the oven. "Hand me that blue hot pad on the table." Taking the hot pad from her daughter, she continued, "Your breakfast is on the counter
Sara ignored her daughter, remembering the safety she felt in Joe's arms and the undeniable passion his kisses spiked within her. She grabbed her stomach, trying to stop the desires from returning.
When Joe walked closer, she put her right arm around him and gave him a brief hug. "Thanks. See you there. Mom's in the kitchen. Gotta go." She switched the glove and bat to the right hand, put her baseball cap on straight and jogged down the sidewalk
Joe took the rubber band loose from her ponytail and ran his fingers through her hair. "I prefer your hair down, so I can see the blonde streaks." He brushed hair from her cheek. "I happen to think it's beautiful." He then put his arms around her. "I'm sorry you're uncomfortable." He kissed her cheek. "Last night you were gorgeous, but to be perfectly honest I've never seen you more beautiful than you are right now."
Joe grinned, watching her leave. I love you too, Sara.
Joe grinned as he lifted her hand and kissed her little finger. "Have I ever told you how cute you are when you're frustrated and jealous?" He touched the tip of her nose. "She walked up to me. I guess she has a daughter on the team. She invited me to have drinks with her at the country club after the game
"I let Ms. Moore know how beautiful you are on the inside as well as the outside." He sat. "I then asked if she could look me in the eye and tell me she never had sex until her wedding night."
Joe chuckled. "Don't be sorry. You're reaction was a normal mom reaction." He took her hand in his. "And don't worry about Ginger staring at us. I believe she's jealous of you."
Boy, the folks in town are narrow minded and judgmental. Sara should be happy Joe defends her honor and is in love with her. Your latest chapter is a pure delight. I hope your doing fine. Keep the faith and I sending out my prayers. I look forward to reading your next chapter to your romance 'Another Pretty Face.'
Melissa.
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reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Barbara,
your latest chapter is wonderfully written. I loved it. Sara's daughter is nosey about her kissing Joe. Here are some paragraphs that stood out:
Sara measured dough and placed it carefully on the cookie sheet. "I said it's none of your business." She turned toward the oven. "Hand me that blue hot pad on the table." Taking the hot pad from her daughter, she continued, "Your breakfast is on the counter
Sara ignored her daughter, remembering the safety she felt in Joe's arms and the undeniable passion his kisses spiked within her. She grabbed her stomach, trying to stop the desires from returning.
When Joe walked closer, she put her right arm around him and gave him a brief hug. "Thanks. See you there. Mom's in the kitchen. Gotta go." She switched the glove and bat to the right hand, put her baseball cap on straight and jogged down the sidewalk
Joe took the rubber band loose from her ponytail and ran his fingers through her hair. "I prefer your hair down, so I can see the blonde streaks." He brushed hair from her cheek. "I happen to think it's beautiful." He then put his arms around her. "I'm sorry you're uncomfortable." He kissed her cheek. "Last night you were gorgeous, but to be perfectly honest I've never seen you more beautiful than you are right now."
Joe grinned, watching her leave. I love you too, Sara.
Joe grinned as he lifted her hand and kissed her little finger. "Have I ever told you how cute you are when you're frustrated and jealous?" He touched the tip of her nose. "She walked up to me. I guess she has a daughter on the team. She invited me to have drinks with her at the country club after the game
"I let Ms. Moore know how beautiful you are on the inside as well as the outside." He sat. "I then asked if she could look me in the eye and tell me she never had sex until her wedding night."
Joe chuckled. "Don't be sorry. You're reaction was a normal mom reaction." He took her hand in his. "And don't worry about Ginger staring at us. I believe she's jealous of you."
Boy, the folks in town are narrow minded and judgmental. Sara should be happy Joe defends her honor and is in love with her. Your latest chapter is a pure delight. I hope your doing fine. Keep the faith and I sending out my prayers. I look forward to reading your next chapter to your romance 'Another Pretty Face.'
Melissa.
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Comment Written 14-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your prayers and support.