~A Nod to Gungalo~
Dedicated to a dear friend who I terribly miss...110 total reviews
Comment from maggieadams
Wow, Dean, this is a great tribute. It is a hopeful tear-jerker, if that makes sense. Your rhyme and rhythm were beautifully in sync, like Pam's poems, full of beauty and empathy.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Wow, Dean, this is a great tribute. It is a hopeful tear-jerker, if that makes sense. Your rhyme and rhythm were beautifully in sync, like Pam's poems, full of beauty and empathy.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for the cut and paste reply, maggiedams, my friend. It's my fault, not yours, I've fallen so far behind, and I just wanted to you to know that I do appreciate your readership, very much!
Comment from mrsmajor
Dean, Gungalo stands alone in her special place, her work was hers alone, no matter what the standing...she wrote of life, its love, and you have shown how much of what she taught you remains...she would be happy for you...Yes I am also saddened by the serious illness of our friend Maureen, I am still praying for her...We have been Blessed with the greatness of the pens of these wonderful writers...You have achieved much, and you deserve your place....Pam will always be on that list perhaps some will not see her name, but I for one, will always remember her work, she brought to me a special joy, often I would tell her how much her work reminded me of my Richard, she's send me a sigh and a smile......She will always be with us, as one of the Fanstory family of writers...Thanks so much for sharing this work with us, it was a joy to read....
Hugs
Victoria
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Dean, Gungalo stands alone in her special place, her work was hers alone, no matter what the standing...she wrote of life, its love, and you have shown how much of what she taught you remains...she would be happy for you...Yes I am also saddened by the serious illness of our friend Maureen, I am still praying for her...We have been Blessed with the greatness of the pens of these wonderful writers...You have achieved much, and you deserve your place....Pam will always be on that list perhaps some will not see her name, but I for one, will always remember her work, she brought to me a special joy, often I would tell her how much her work reminded me of my Richard, she's send me a sigh and a smile......She will always be with us, as one of the Fanstory family of writers...Thanks so much for sharing this work with us, it was a joy to read....
Hugs
Victoria
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for the cut and paste reply, Victoria, my friend. It's my fault, not yours, I've fallen so far behind, and I just wanted to you to know that I do appreciate your readership, very much!
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I understand my friend, it happens to us from time to times, I am also far behind...time simply creeps up, and then we are lost..
Hugs
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Boy, you said a mouthful there! Thanks for understanding. :)
Your caring for Pam, is clear, and she would be so proud of you!...You have a special place as well...
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Thanks, Victoria. You're very kind. :)
Comment from amahra
That was so sweet and thoughtful of you, Dean. My heart sank when I recognized that symbol of her image. Your poem is so beautiful and touching.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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That was so sweet and thoughtful of you, Dean. My heart sank when I recognized that symbol of her image. Your poem is so beautiful and touching.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thanks, amahra. I really miss her being around and available to talk to. I'm sure I'm not alone there.
Comment from granny goes viral
I have hardly any more stars and it is only Sunday. And yet, the depth of the love these two have inspired moves me greatly. This is a lovely tribute. I came on the FS scene as Pam left for a higher place. The same day I think. I was compared to her in my early attempts at writing. What an honor when I dipped into her portfolio. I fanned Maureen as well. May birds of of feather fly into the sky.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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I have hardly any more stars and it is only Sunday. And yet, the depth of the love these two have inspired moves me greatly. This is a lovely tribute. I came on the FS scene as Pam left for a higher place. The same day I think. I was compared to her in my early attempts at writing. What an honor when I dipped into her portfolio. I fanned Maureen as well. May birds of of feather fly into the sky.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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They certainly do, granny. And don't feel bad, you're not alone. I've already used four of my meager allotment of six star ratings today alone. There are so many talented authors here, yourself included, and so few exceptional ratings to pass around.
I sincerely appreciate your thoughtful sentiments.
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So far from the last post, Maureen is hanging in. Let's hope.
Comment from poetbear
Pam was a Dear friend and her loss still pains me.
I hear you and understand.
I lived every line and for the time I read this she was here.
Miss her.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Pam was a Dear friend and her loss still pains me.
I hear you and understand.
I lived every line and for the time I read this she was here.
Miss her.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thanks, poetbear. I appreciate your very touching review. Thanks so much...
Comment from Bina1
Your fine work reminds me of her, I miss her dearly. She was such a tremendous help to me, encouraging me with my poems. A sweet, kind, passionate woman. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Your fine work reminds me of her, I miss her dearly. She was such a tremendous help to me, encouraging me with my poems. A sweet, kind, passionate woman. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Bina1, she did much the same for me. She taught me how to place animations in my poetry and prose, much to the chagrin of some members here, and kept encouraging me to write poetry, especially the prompts and contests, as they often force you to think outside your comfort zone. I simply could not pass her name in the rankings without giving her a nod of recognition.
Comment from nor84
Beautifully done, Dean. Did you know that some bitch has been writing attacks in Gungalo's profile, which some people had set up as a shrine? I don't know if she still is doing it. How cowardly is that, attacking a person who can't reply? I reported her once when somebody told me.
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Beautifully done, Dean. Did you know that some bitch has been writing attacks in Gungalo's profile, which some people had set up as a shrine? I don't know if she still is doing it. How cowardly is that, attacking a person who can't reply? I reported her once when somebody told me.
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for the cut and paste reply, Norma, my friend. It's my fault, not yours, I've fallen so far behind, and I just wanted to you to know that I do appreciate your readership, very much!
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Cut and paste replies are fine, Dean, and I fully understand falling behind with responses.
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Thanks! :]
Comment from GWHARGIS
I always loved her response of sigh. It was so calming and peaceful. A wonderful and honest musing that shows the readers how touched you are and how much you appreciate the friendships made here. Wonderful poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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I always loved her response of sigh. It was so calming and peaceful. A wonderful and honest musing that shows the readers how touched you are and how much you appreciate the friendships made here. Wonderful poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for the cut and paste reply, Gretchen, my friend. It's my fault, not yours, I've fallen so far behind, and I just wanted to you to know that I do appreciate your readership, very much!
Comment from Dom G Robles
A beautiful poem. Dean, you made your sorrow deep and clear. Not light or shallow but makes me weep. Gungalo.
No wonder why, I don't see that name again. Thanks for sharing. Dom
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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A beautiful poem. Dean, you made your sorrow deep and clear. Not light or shallow but makes me weep. Gungalo.
No wonder why, I don't see that name again. Thanks for sharing. Dom
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for the cut and paste reply, Dom, my friend. It's my fault, not yours, I've fallen so far behind, and I just wanted to you to know that I do appreciate your readership, very much!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Dean, this is such a touching and heartfelt tribute to the person and poet that Gungalo was, and always, will be.
It is a compassionate and caring act to acknowledge the passing of Gungalo's rank by reflecting upon the mentoring she offered to help you become all you can be.
Well done.:) Shirley
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Dean, this is such a touching and heartfelt tribute to the person and poet that Gungalo was, and always, will be.
It is a compassionate and caring act to acknowledge the passing of Gungalo's rank by reflecting upon the mentoring she offered to help you become all you can be.
Well done.:) Shirley
Comment Written 28-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2014
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Sorry for this 'cut-and-paste' response, Shirley. It's my fault I have fallen so far behind. I just wanted you to know that I appreciate your support and your readership, very much!
Thank you!