Grandpa T.
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Comment from TheMusicOfWords
Good job on this! It basically kept me going to the end, and I enjoyed seeing how it all turned out. A couple of times, the dialogue seemed a little forced, but overall, I think it was good and well-written.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Good job on this! It basically kept me going to the end, and I enjoyed seeing how it all turned out. A couple of times, the dialogue seemed a little forced, but overall, I think it was good and well-written.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2012
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Thank you very much!