Jerry Jing-Jang Comes to Town
A cowboy tale74 total reviews
Comment from Essence16
I think this was a very creative and interesting poem. I liked the idea and I think the numerous details you used were very helpful. Great job on this!
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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I think this was a very creative and interesting poem. I liked the idea and I think the numerous details you used were very helpful. Great job on this!
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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It was a fun poem to write. I'm so glad you liked it. Thanks for this great review.
Comment from Glasstruth
A great story poem with an interesting name "Jerry Jing-Jang." It reads simply and is easy to understand. Funny, how cowboy stories like this work so well. Reminds me of that old hit song from the 60s "Ringo" sung Lorne Greene. One thing I might add is that cowboys back then usually got drunk on whiskey. Drinking beer alone, my God you'd need to drink a case, if you're that used to alcohol. Still, an awesome story. If I had a sixer I'd surely use it. Wonderful! Les
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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A great story poem with an interesting name "Jerry Jing-Jang." It reads simply and is easy to understand. Funny, how cowboy stories like this work so well. Reminds me of that old hit song from the 60s "Ringo" sung Lorne Greene. One thing I might add is that cowboys back then usually got drunk on whiskey. Drinking beer alone, my God you'd need to drink a case, if you're that used to alcohol. Still, an awesome story. If I had a sixer I'd surely use it. Wonderful! Les
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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I'll take the six you'd like to give it. Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Janie King
This is really delightful and love that the bad guys got caught without a lot of blood shed..it makes it more special the poems are dedicated to your dad. Great job. God bless.
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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This is really delightful and love that the bad guys got caught without a lot of blood shed..it makes it more special the poems are dedicated to your dad. Great job. God bless.
Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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I'm so glad you enyoyed it. When I was little I really believed he was Jerry Jing-Jang. I don't remember the stories too well and neither does he, so I made most of it up myself. Thanks for the six stars!
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My mom would tell my little brother stories about Bossie, his stuffed ow, and pastsy, his stuffed dog..when he grew up and had children he came to mom and asked her where she got those books because he couldn't find them in the store and he wanted to buy them for his children...of course they were just stories she made up for him..they should have written them down by all means. God bless.
Comment from ennahanid
There is just such good writing in here that I have used all my 6's and so I am sorry I don't have one left to give you.
I have always loved a hero and Jerry Jing-Jang gets my vote for hero of the day...absolutely loved it, thanks so much...Dinah
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reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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There is just such good writing in here that I have used all my 6's and so I am sorry I don't have one left to give you.
I have always loved a hero and Jerry Jing-Jang gets my vote for hero of the day...absolutely loved it, thanks so much...Dinah
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Comment Written 23-May-2012
reply by the author on 23-May-2012
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I'll take the 6 you'd like to give it. Thanks! This is loosely based on stories my dad told. I can't remember them too well and neither can he, so I made most of it up myself.