Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Chapter 15; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from misscookie
Wow! He sounds like my late husband
He always made plans for us without asking me .
But they were always wonderfu.l So I didn't mind..... Much.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Wow! He sounds like my late husband
He always made plans for us without asking me .
But they were always wonderfu.l So I didn't mind..... Much.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Husbands tend to do that. Mine is often guilty, but I there to remind him. I am not sure what I need to do to improve this post to get 5 stars.
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Barbara,
I almost hate to see this story end...it is such a beautiful love story and I have enjoyed reading every word. I don't think it presumptuous of Joe to make all the wedding plans. In fact to me it is very romantic and demonstrates how much he loves Sara. I thought the ending perfect. Well done and I hope you are feeling okay. Blessings, chey
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Hi Barbara,
I almost hate to see this story end...it is such a beautiful love story and I have enjoyed reading every word. I don't think it presumptuous of Joe to make all the wedding plans. In fact to me it is very romantic and demonstrates how much he loves Sara. I thought the ending perfect. Well done and I hope you are feeling okay. Blessings, chey
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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I will, after I begin to feel better, write more about my Task Force men and I am sure Joe, Sara, Matt, Dani, Steven, and Leya will make cameo appearances. I can't imagine they won't, Thank you for your support
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You are welcome and I continue you to keep you in my prayers...chey
Comment from Fireshadow
Barbara, congratulations on the completion of this excellent manuscript. All throughout, your clear, down to earth, easy flowing writing style has held many readers captive, including myself. I wish you the best of luck in polishing the final version and, hopefully, having it published. Many blessings for your good health, my friend.
Ama
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Barbara, congratulations on the completion of this excellent manuscript. All throughout, your clear, down to earth, easy flowing writing style has held many readers captive, including myself. I wish you the best of luck in polishing the final version and, hopefully, having it published. Many blessings for your good health, my friend.
Ama
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your encouraging words and the kind review.
Comment from Sarah_Goldwell
Well, that was a satisfying ending- not that I ever thought for one minute they wouldn't get married- it was more a case of how and when. I'm more pleased for Cassie lol. I've always liked the relationship between them and it will be good for her to have a male role-model x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Well, that was a satisfying ending- not that I ever thought for one minute they wouldn't get married- it was more a case of how and when. I'm more pleased for Cassie lol. I've always liked the relationship between them and it will be good for her to have a male role-model x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from markk
I think its a beautiful and romantic piece and a lovely ending to a strong romance. Well written and moving indeed. Thanks so much for sharing! Good luck with publishing and with the rest of your treatments.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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I think its a beautiful and romantic piece and a lovely ending to a strong romance. Well written and moving indeed. Thanks so much for sharing! Good luck with publishing and with the rest of your treatments.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and encouragment.
Comment from swosugrad09
Excellent ending! I like how Sara and Joe had to talk through some things before she finally agreed to marry him. If she hadn't of agreed I would have been upset. Great use of prolonging the proposal question and keeping the reader on edge.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Excellent ending! I like how Sara and Joe had to talk through some things before she finally agreed to marry him. If she hadn't of agreed I would have been upset. Great use of prolonging the proposal question and keeping the reader on edge.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is another end to another novel, i will miss reading about sara and joe, and look forward to when you are feeling strong enough to write another task force book, i love your writing. your writing is something i look forward to and look for your name in my message box.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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this is another end to another novel, i will miss reading about sara and joe, and look forward to when you are feeling strong enough to write another task force book, i love your writing. your writing is something i look forward to and look for your name in my message box.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for you for the kind words and support.
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. The six stars are for the entire books and the difficulties you have had to overcome to post it. Good job.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very easy read. The six stars are for the entire books and the difficulties you have had to overcome to post it. Good job.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kindness.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
Dani even choose the underwear - chose
whose going to care for the house - who's
rose covered archway - rose-covered
I enjoyed this conversation and the way it ends your story, Barbara.
He really did mean well, but finally Sara was the one with a good point - he really should not have made all those plans without her input. LOL I like how she stood up for herself and let it be known that from now on she would be more of an equal partner, but for that day, a wedding sounded like a good idea. LOL
He's so cute - would it help if I reminded you about the trip to the zoo? LOL
This six is for the entire book - it's a tradition of mine, giving a six to the final chapters of books I've followed all the way through IF I enjoyed them and think it's a worthy book :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Dani even choose the underwear - chose
whose going to care for the house - who's
rose covered archway - rose-covered
I enjoyed this conversation and the way it ends your story, Barbara.
He really did mean well, but finally Sara was the one with a good point - he really should not have made all those plans without her input. LOL I like how she stood up for herself and let it be known that from now on she would be more of an equal partner, but for that day, a wedding sounded like a good idea. LOL
He's so cute - would it help if I reminded you about the trip to the zoo? LOL
This six is for the entire book - it's a tradition of mine, giving a six to the final chapters of books I've followed all the way through IF I enjoyed them and think it's a worthy book :-) Brooke
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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I will make the corrections and I appreciate your eagle eye. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from joannesnow
Another well written chapter. Joe and Sara have developed into very realistic characters. I am so glad he said yes. Everything seems to be heading in the right direction. Great chapter. Leaves the reader wanting more details.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Another well written chapter. Joe and Sara have developed into very realistic characters. I am so glad he said yes. Everything seems to be heading in the right direction. Great chapter. Leaves the reader wanting more details.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2011
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2011
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Thank you for your kind review.