Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Chapter 10; part two"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from adewpearl
They must painting another room - BE painting
We've been good friend for twenty years - friends
because you wanted to held - BE held
First, before the review, the important stuff. You don't have to be brave all the time. Give yourself permission to throw a hissy fit if you want to about your hair or about feeling fatigued. What you're going through sucks. If you want to punch a pillow or yell a dirty word or just plain old cry, please give yourself permission to do it. I so wish I could give you a big old-fashioned hug.
Now, for the story - I think you're doing a great job with their evolving relationship and her mixed emotions. I love when she slugs him and his response :-) I really have a lot invested in these characters and their relationship :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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They must painting another room - BE painting
We've been good friend for twenty years - friends
because you wanted to held - BE held
First, before the review, the important stuff. You don't have to be brave all the time. Give yourself permission to throw a hissy fit if you want to about your hair or about feeling fatigued. What you're going through sucks. If you want to punch a pillow or yell a dirty word or just plain old cry, please give yourself permission to do it. I so wish I could give you a big old-fashioned hug.
Now, for the story - I think you're doing a great job with their evolving relationship and her mixed emotions. I love when she slugs him and his response :-) I really have a lot invested in these characters and their relationship :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 13-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2010
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I edited this during my chemo treatment and I obiviously missed some things. Thank you for having my back and giving me permission for throwing a temper tantrum. I haven't, but I am close.