Another Pretty Face
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Chatper 2 Part three"Can love survive small town gossip?
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Comment from BeautifulLie
Awwh they had a little dance together! So sweet =D At least she opened up a little. I'm getting a feeling that is something that's very hard for her to do. Thanks for sharing, loving where this story is going!
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Awwh they had a little dance together! So sweet =D At least she opened up a little. I'm getting a feeling that is something that's very hard for her to do. Thanks for sharing, loving where this story is going!
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your time.
Comment from c_lucas
You are building the plot on a smooth even scale. This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. Very good job.
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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You are building the plot on a smooth even scale. This is very well written with good imagery and descriptive scheme. Very good job.
Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from adewpearl
I guess only people with kids know that POS means parent over shoulder. LOL
I can see why Cassie feels intimidated when she has spent her life in a small town and Joe is a government agent about to become a general, who speaks multiple languages, has seen the entire world, has been with a bunch of women... And not only has she been in one town, but her experience there has been limited by her reputation and her being such a young mom. Boy, does she have to build up some self esteem to believe she can hold her own with this man. Brooke
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reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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I guess only people with kids know that POS means parent over shoulder. LOL
I can see why Cassie feels intimidated when she has spent her life in a small town and Joe is a government agent about to become a general, who speaks multiple languages, has seen the entire world, has been with a bunch of women... And not only has she been in one town, but her experience there has been limited by her reputation and her being such a young mom. Boy, does she have to build up some self esteem to believe she can hold her own with this man. Brooke
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Comment Written 09-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. Yes, there are some interesting problems ahead.