Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Good Night, Keilah"A collection of my children's poems
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Comment from adewpearl
She and her outfit are adorable :-)
excellent use of mono-rhyming in each stanza
nice alliteration in phrases like foam flying free
and in splishing and splashing
I like the way you bookend each stanza
excellent use of iambic meter to make for great cadence when read aloud, and excellent use of enjambment to keep that flow going from line to line
Delightful use of these fantasy creatures
Any child would love this poem - heck, I love this poem :-) Brooke
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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She and her outfit are adorable :-)
excellent use of mono-rhyming in each stanza
nice alliteration in phrases like foam flying free
and in splishing and splashing
I like the way you bookend each stanza
excellent use of iambic meter to make for great cadence when read aloud, and excellent use of enjambment to keep that flow going from line to line
Delightful use of these fantasy creatures
Any child would love this poem - heck, I love this poem :-) Brooke
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Brooke, thanks for the great review and the kind words.
Steve
Comment from kiwigirl2821
This is a sweetly written poem that can't help but make a reader smile. We get to watch and live in Keilah's world for a few minutes and what a delightful place to be. Yea! xoxo Kiwi
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reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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This is a sweetly written poem that can't help but make a reader smile. We get to watch and live in Keilah's world for a few minutes and what a delightful place to be. Yea! xoxo Kiwi
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Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you!
Yep, the world of most children would be an exhilarating place.
Steve
Comment from Irish Rain
pure magic...i loved every enchanying word of this poem for your grand-daughter! i wish i could give you a 10...or more! blessings tonite!
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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pure magic...i loved every enchanying word of this poem for your grand-daughter! i wish i could give you a 10...or more! blessings tonite!
Comment Written 23-Jan-2014
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2014
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Thank you for the ten-star review - I believe that's the first I've ever had!
Steve