If Some Could Tell!
If we were learned to tell! A Non-Fiction in 220 words112 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Hi AC! How are you? Haven't seen you in a while. It is the wise person who thinks before they speak, particularly if their hearts and souls are filled with envy. Or the corollary they speak to deliberately mislead and hurt others. It's best to be quiet and think long and hard before you speak. Even though we've much language we really are truly unaware of the power of our words and how they shape our reality, not describe what already exists.
Some people are emotional midgets and that's just the fact. They seek to destroy the good in others that they perceive they do not have in themselves. Because we DO speak from our hearts regardless of what resides in it. Everything we say only reflects our own emotional state, not the truth about others.
Great job.
Gloria
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Hi AC! How are you? Haven't seen you in a while. It is the wise person who thinks before they speak, particularly if their hearts and souls are filled with envy. Or the corollary they speak to deliberately mislead and hurt others. It's best to be quiet and think long and hard before you speak. Even though we've much language we really are truly unaware of the power of our words and how they shape our reality, not describe what already exists.
Some people are emotional midgets and that's just the fact. They seek to destroy the good in others that they perceive they do not have in themselves. Because we DO speak from our hearts regardless of what resides in it. Everything we say only reflects our own emotional state, not the truth about others.
Great job.
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Curtis Hatch
Al,
I must admit; the sentence structure makes the piece difficult to follow although I must agree with what you are saying. Perhaps the message would have been clearer had you not used so many run-on sentences.
Consider the following:
A (truly)[true] wise person tells what (is) true, absolute, necessary, is needed, wanted, required, demanded, asked, rational, justifiable, ethical or moral.
Curtis
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Al,
I must admit; the sentence structure makes the piece difficult to follow although I must agree with what you are saying. Perhaps the message would have been clearer had you not used so many run-on sentences.
Consider the following:
A (truly)[true] wise person tells what (is) true, absolute, necessary, is needed, wanted, required, demanded, asked, rational, justifiable, ethical or moral.
Curtis
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
It takes a lot to allow God to make you into a wise person. probably one of the prayers I pray most is to ask God for wisdom, knowledge and understanding in the spiritual and natural realm. He says He will give it to any man that asks liberlaly. Good piece. God loves you and so do we.
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It takes a lot to allow God to make you into a wise person. probably one of the prayers I pray most is to ask God for wisdom, knowledge and understanding in the spiritual and natural realm. He says He will give it to any man that asks liberlaly. Good piece. God loves you and so do we.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from BunnyS
Your message is awesome, and so very true! I had a hard time reading some parts because it runs on a bit and could really use some punctuation... or fewer words.
I love your sentiment, though, and what you write is spot on. Too bad everyone can't follow your advise! Good job!
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Your message is awesome, and so very true! I had a hard time reading some parts because it runs on a bit and could really use some punctuation... or fewer words.
I love your sentiment, though, and what you write is spot on. Too bad everyone can't follow your advise! Good job!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Selina Stambi
My brow was furrowed as I galloped along with your volley of words, Al.
I do get your drift and agree one hundred percent. I may not have used so many words, though!
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My brow was furrowed as I galloped along with your volley of words, Al.
I do get your drift and agree one hundred percent. I may not have used so many words, though!
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Lily Y
Wow, what a powerful piece. Each line had me saying to myself,"so true, so true!" I think you did a wonderful job weaving your words and getting a specific idea across to the audience. I can tell you put a lot of yourself into this work. I can also understand why it earned the all time best status! I hope you consider my comments. Keep writing!-Lily
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Wow, what a powerful piece. Each line had me saying to myself,"so true, so true!" I think you did a wonderful job weaving your words and getting a specific idea across to the audience. I can tell you put a lot of yourself into this work. I can also understand why it earned the all time best status! I hope you consider my comments. Keep writing!-Lily
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from STEPHEN A CARTER
The master of the run-on evocative sentence has returned. Welcome back friend. Provocative and insightful and a touch naughty at times, I've always enjoyed what I call your esoteric and may I say intelligent rants. Looking forward to more provocations.
Many regards:
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The master of the run-on evocative sentence has returned. Welcome back friend. Provocative and insightful and a touch naughty at times, I've always enjoyed what I call your esoteric and may I say intelligent rants. Looking forward to more provocations.
Many regards:
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from Dustybones
believe you have a few run on sentences here in this story. I think what you say is good, but you need to format this to makke it readable. Cya.
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believe you have a few run on sentences here in this story. I think what you say is good, but you need to format this to makke it readable. Cya.
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from SimplyaStudent
This is a very good piece of work that i just finished reading. This work is a proverb in itself and rings true witha all human nature. Well done. :-) Ss
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This is a very good piece of work that i just finished reading. This work is a proverb in itself and rings true witha all human nature. Well done. :-) Ss
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013
Comment from kenni
Loose lips sink ships, it's said. Once the ancient art of conversation mastered, if mastery was possible for all, we'd all become politicians and there'd be no one left to sucker. In some neighborhoods a wise man say's nothing. kenni
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Loose lips sink ships, it's said. Once the ancient art of conversation mastered, if mastery was possible for all, we'd all become politicians and there'd be no one left to sucker. In some neighborhoods a wise man say's nothing. kenni
Comment Written 21-Oct-2013