I Asked For That One
Contest Entry109 total reviews
Comment from Matoshka
I can see why you won, Cedar. This is priceless, now only does the picture fit your words, you words make it even better. Loved it. LOL Blessings
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
  |
I can see why you won, Cedar. This is priceless, now only does the picture fit your words, you words make it even better. Loved it. LOL Blessings
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thanks my friend for your wonderful comments, I appreciate it. Have a great day. Bill
-
You are so welcome, Bill, it is a hoot. Blessings
Comment from pickthorn
LOL I see how you won the contest. Women! You asked very politely... how could that have made anyone mad? Perfect poem for Humor poetry contest with a minimum of 17 syllables. Great job.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
 |
LOL I see how you won the contest. Women! You asked very politely... how could that have made anyone mad? Perfect poem for Humor poetry contest with a minimum of 17 syllables. Great job.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thanks my friend for your great review and rating, I appreciate it very much. Have a real nice day. Bill
Comment from visionary1234
gross!!! ikky!!! no wonder you won with this one - well deserved! We were just talking about this mentality the other day - nice to put a funny spin on it, especially as so many people seem to pursue it as a serious way of life!!! Congrats!
:)S
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
gross!!! ikky!!! no wonder you won with this one - well deserved! We were just talking about this mentality the other day - nice to put a funny spin on it, especially as so many people seem to pursue it as a serious way of life!!! Congrats!
:)S
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thanks for your insightful review, I appreciate your comments. Have a real nice day. Bill
Comment from Pili Pubul
LOL love it, very eloquent 5-7-5 no words tell the perfect answer
very clever indeed. True expert in sign language. If it was a contest
Would be a sure winner... Thank you. Pili
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
LOL love it, very eloquent 5-7-5 no words tell the perfect answer
very clever indeed. True expert in sign language. If it was a contest
Would be a sure winner... Thank you. Pili
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you my friend for your great review, I appreciate your nice comments. This poem was in a contest and as you said, it did win! Thank you Pili and have a nice day. Bill
-
LOL. Hey , congratulations ! Well deserved. Pili
Comment from brentman99
Great poem and I love the picture. Are those beer cans being used as curlers in her hair? If so, I applaud her initiative. Kidding aside, good comedy picture to go with a good poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
Great poem and I love the picture. Are those beer cans being used as curlers in her hair? If so, I applaud her initiative. Kidding aside, good comedy picture to go with a good poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you Brent for your review, I appreciate it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay. I'm in my 5th year here and if I can be of any help to you, please let me know. Bill
Comment from NicciFaye
Awesome and excellent. A great poem and a true one at times...I love the pun and the typical male perspective and woman's agreement that our work is NEVER done...lol
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
Awesome and excellent. A great poem and a true one at times...I love the pun and the typical male perspective and woman's agreement that our work is NEVER done...lol
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you for your review and thank all you ladies for putting up with us. If not for you gal's to keep us straight, it would be a mess. Have a great day my friend. Bill
Comment from SteveY
Well I can sure see why this one was a winner. Great picture that you chose for this one. Pictures are worth a thousand words and it's never truer than here.
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
Well I can sure see why this one was a winner. Great picture that you chose for this one. Pictures are worth a thousand words and it's never truer than here.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thanks Steve for your nice comments and you're right about the picture. As soon as I saw it, the words just popped into my head. Have a nice day my friend. Bill
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Bill,
It is obvious to me why you won the contest. This 5/7/5 poem is so funny but having been a mother of three and a wife of one it is so true. Great picture to highlight your well chosen words. Well done and congrats...chey
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
Hi Bill,
It is obvious to me why you won the contest. This 5/7/5 poem is so funny but having been a mother of three and a wife of one it is so true. Great picture to highlight your well chosen words. Well done and congrats...chey
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Hello Chey: Thank you for your nice comments my friend. And thank all you ladies for doing the things that you do in order to hold the family together. Without you, the men-folk would simply be "lost." Thanks again and take care of yourself my friend. Bill
-
welcome Bill
Comment from Poetofheart2013
A very funny and cute poem and really like the picture too.
You words was right to point with bit of humor. that was
good. Good Job
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
A very funny and cute poem and really like the picture too.
You words was right to point with bit of humor. that was
good. Good Job
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thank you for your wonderful review and rating, I really appreciate it very much. Also, welcome to this site. I hope you have a long enjoyable stay. I've been here for nearly 5 years, so if I can be of any help to you, please let me know. Have a great day. Cedar/Bill
Comment from allborn66
This is a very cute poem. The word choice is excellent. The picture makes the piece. You communicated the tone and theme well with this presentation.
Barbara
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
|
This is a very cute poem. The word choice is excellent. The picture makes the piece. You communicated the tone and theme well with this presentation.
Barbara
Comment Written 16-Oct-2013
reply by the author on 16-Oct-2013
-
Thanks Barbara, I really appreciate your nice comments. Have a great day my friend. Bill