Steve's Poems for Kids
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Crazy Critters"A collection of my children's poems
69 total reviews
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is very clever. It was a joy to read about all the "animals" that live in our houses. I'm sure the kids would love this well written poem.
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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This is very clever. It was a joy to read about all the "animals" that live in our houses. I'm sure the kids would love this well written poem.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you - glad you enjoyed.
Comment from Lizizme
Absolutely entertaining. Great cadence and word flow. It's true, most grown-up wouldn't understand. Except those who write here! Excellent imagination. Love this.
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Absolutely entertaining. Great cadence and word flow. It's true, most grown-up wouldn't understand. Except those who write here! Excellent imagination. Love this.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you for the enthusiastic review. :o)
Comment from nora arjuna
well you have charmed not just children, but this mother as well, despite the fact that i'm wary of critters. enjoyable read and amazed that you could go on and on. well rhymed too. best wishes in the contest.
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well you have charmed not just children, but this mother as well, despite the fact that i'm wary of critters. enjoyable read and amazed that you could go on and on. well rhymed too. best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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I reckon I could have gone on a few more verses!
Thanks for the kind words.
Comment from PoesyPoet
I love every line of this one. From the first little made up critter to the last slipper head and then the sweet kiddie boppers. Great contest entry. Hands down, you win!
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I love every line of this one. From the first little made up critter to the last slipper head and then the sweet kiddie boppers. Great contest entry. Hands down, you win!
Comment Written 10-May-2011
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Thank you for the enthusiastic review.
Comment from jamma
This is fantabulous! Do we have a new Dr Seuss among us? I thoroughly enjoyed this and could almost see all the critters playing and having fun. What a fun write! Good luck in the contest. You have my vote!
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This is fantabulous! Do we have a new Dr Seuss among us? I thoroughly enjoyed this and could almost see all the critters playing and having fun. What a fun write! Good luck in the contest. You have my vote!
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Oh, no! Two comparisons to Dr Seuss! My head will swell bigger than that Cat in his Hat. Thank you.
Comment from Emeryald
This is a lovely little poem and you have a wonderful imagination, my favourite is definitely the purple Pudgy!
There should be more poetry like this, in fact it should be compulsory, love it x
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This is a lovely little poem and you have a wonderful imagination, my favourite is definitely the purple Pudgy!
There should be more poetry like this, in fact it should be compulsory, love it x
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you - I don't usually write for kids, but there is more funny stuff in my portfolio, which you'll be able to see once you know who I am!!
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Ah ha! A poet of mystery and mirth cheers Emeryald
Comment from Cedar
This is great and written with perfect rhyming and flow.
The children would simply love this piece. It made me laugh and I like that. Great job and good luck. Bill
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This is great and written with perfect rhyming and flow.
The children would simply love this piece. It made me laugh and I like that. Great job and good luck. Bill
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thanks, Bill - always glad to get a laugh.
Comment from DIS-illusioned
--"Come closer now and hold my hand;
Grown-ups wouldn't understand."
lol! I wonder what's up. :)
--Nice rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--"Well that's because within her broom
Abides a baby Babaroom."
lol!
--"In that dark space beneath your bed
Slithers a silvery Slipperhead, "
Hope this part won't be a bit scary. :)
--Interesting 'critters' you created here, with fun, funny names.
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--"Come closer now and hold my hand;
Grown-ups wouldn't understand."
lol! I wonder what's up. :)
--Nice rhymes and rhythmic flow.
--"Well that's because within her broom
Abides a baby Babaroom."
lol!
--"In that dark space beneath your bed
Slithers a silvery Slipperhead, "
Hope this part won't be a bit scary. :)
--Interesting 'critters' you created here, with fun, funny names.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you - I believe most children can tolerate a bit of scariness esp. when associated with silliness...
Comment from Kevin C
This is an excellent piece of writing. The subject is fresh and original. The rhyme and flow are so nice and just speaks to a child. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
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reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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This is an excellent piece of writing. The subject is fresh and original. The rhyme and flow are so nice and just speaks to a child. You did a wonderful job on this poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 10-May-2011
reply by the author on 10-May-2011
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Thank you!