Another Pretty Face
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Comment from RKagan
You have the reader on the edge of our seat. We are as worried about Cassie as your characters are. Because of your fine writing the reader is so engaged that we become part of the novel. I am awaiting your next post!
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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You have the reader on the edge of our seat. We are as worried about Cassie as your characters are. Because of your fine writing the reader is so engaged that we become part of the novel. I am awaiting your next post!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from adewpearl
I love the little comic relief at the end about orange and being under duress. LOL You do such a great job, Barbara, of showing the frantic state of mind of Sara and the huge NEED Joe has of finding Cassie and protecting the woman he loves.
Lots of emotionally charged dialogue and inner monologue in this dramatic chapter. Brooke
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I love the little comic relief at the end about orange and being under duress. LOL You do such a great job, Barbara, of showing the frantic state of mind of Sara and the huge NEED Joe has of finding Cassie and protecting the woman he loves.
Lots of emotionally charged dialogue and inner monologue in this dramatic chapter. Brooke
Comment Written 09-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Thank you Brooke, for your kind review. I am worried that some of my reviewers will get upset because I am going to have Sara paint as a destressor. I actually had a very close friend, who every time her husband was deployed she painted her house. Sometimes more than once.
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I say, whatever works for a person, go for it - it seems realistic to me and certainly doesn't make her seem like she doesn't care enough. Lots of people try to do something other than just non-stop pacing and crying.
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I had another friend who moved furniture. When the kids came home from school they never knew where their bedrooms might be. It's better than drinking and running around. Many wives do that.
Comment from dportwood
barbara.wilkey,
Perhaps a step closer to finding Cassie. That's good because there is room for more story. Well done and keep writing.
Duane
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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barbara.wilkey,
Perhaps a step closer to finding Cassie. That's good because there is room for more story. Well done and keep writing.
Duane
Comment Written 09-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Gungalo
Oh this write is just packed with intrigue and love. I love things like that and look forward to where you are going with this one. Just a wonderful write that pays attention to details that make it what it is ... awesome!!!
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Oh this write is just packed with intrigue and love. I love things like that and look forward to where you are going with this one. Just a wonderful write that pays attention to details that make it what it is ... awesome!!!
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
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My pleasure. Gosh you have 19 other chapters!!! Will I ever get them all read? sigh ............
Comment from c_lucas
You have done a very good job of showing the emotions of Joe and Sara. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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You have done a very good job of showing the emotions of Joe and Sara. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. Good imagery and descriptive scheme.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2010
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2010
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Charlie, thank you for your kind review and continued support.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie