Another Pretty Face
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Comment from Gideon Roth
Hello Barbara, You did another fine job with this story. No spag that I could find and both the narrative and the dialogue is very well done. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to your next post...Tim, aka, Gideon
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Hello Barbara, You did another fine job with this story. No spag that I could find and both the narrative and the dialogue is very well done. Keep up the great writing and I look forward to your next post...Tim, aka, Gideon
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support.
Comment from marcii
Your story continues to be a nice read, this invoked memories of my own reunion, wish it was something as good as this starts.
I thought this can easily be a true scene in many peoples life if their lucky enough.
Nicely done
Marcii
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Your story continues to be a nice read, this invoked memories of my own reunion, wish it was something as good as this starts.
I thought this can easily be a true scene in many peoples life if their lucky enough.
Nicely done
Marcii
Comment Written 18-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written and is another good chapter for your book, i like the sensitive side of this. it's very sweet and enjoyable, i like the other book too, but this one is closer to my reading style. how is your foot? has it healed yet?
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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this is very well written and is another good chapter for your book, i like the sensitive side of this. it's very sweet and enjoyable, i like the other book too, but this one is closer to my reading style. how is your foot? has it healed yet?
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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My ankle is still healing, but according to the doctor, right on schedule. Thank you for asking. I appreciate you reading and reviewing this post.
Comment from Readywriter52
The relationship between Joe and Sara is going very well. He helped her with her zipper and nail polish. He could have taken her to the reunion in his car, but he hired a limousine. He is going all out to help her impress her old schoolmates.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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The relationship between Joe and Sara is going very well. He helped her with her zipper and nail polish. He could have taken her to the reunion in his car, but he hired a limousine. He is going all out to help her impress her old schoolmates.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review. I always enjoy hearing from you.
Comment from fictionwriter
This is the perfect chapter. Slightly romantic with all the gentlemanly requirements filled by a stunning leading man. Very nicely done.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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This is the perfect chapter. Slightly romantic with all the gentlemanly requirements filled by a stunning leading man. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from bowls
Nice touches! The limousine and the roses are great. Your dialogue shows the two definitely becoming closer. You've drawn a lovely picture of two people falling in love. Joe's character is further developed, and he seems, as Sara says, to be the perfect gentleman. In the section of this chapter after the nail polishing incident, Sara says something about "applying for job as a manicurist...." Did you mean to put "a" before job? I really enjoyed this chapter. The story gets better and better. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope things go well for them.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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Nice touches! The limousine and the roses are great. Your dialogue shows the two definitely becoming closer. You've drawn a lovely picture of two people falling in love. Joe's character is further developed, and he seems, as Sara says, to be the perfect gentleman. In the section of this chapter after the nail polishing incident, Sara says something about "applying for job as a manicurist...." Did you mean to put "a" before job? I really enjoyed this chapter. The story gets better and better. Can't wait to read the next chapter. I hope things go well for them.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2010
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I have read this post over and over and still miss those little words. I read it as if it was there. Thank you for catching it for me. I apreciate your review.
Comment from Tellis
Ah, such romance, but I'm a guy and can't wait till he gets to kick some butt. Maybe one of those creeps from her class, hint, hint. LoL Excellent chapter keep it up.
Tellis
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Ah, such romance, but I'm a guy and can't wait till he gets to kick some butt. Maybe one of those creeps from her class, hint, hint. LoL Excellent chapter keep it up.
Tellis
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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I can promise you Joe kicks some butt. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Nanashirley
Great Chapter. I could feel the eyes on them. I especially like the way you put the caring real life stuff in and the end was a hoot. I wait for more.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Great Chapter. I could feel the eyes on them. I especially like the way you put the caring real life stuff in and the end was a hoot. I wait for more.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Rama Rao
You are at your very best when writing about Romance.
This chapter was superb and had a sheen of its own.
I admire ur novels except for the repeated use of the Task force. Must all your heroes belong to this so called Task force? Kindly consider.
With best wishes,
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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You are at your very best when writing about Romance.
This chapter was superb and had a sheen of its own.
I admire ur novels except for the repeated use of the Task force. Must all your heroes belong to this so called Task force? Kindly consider.
With best wishes,
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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I am writing about the Task Force men. Actually my first novel had nothing to do with the Task Force. I am writing two right now that have nothing to do with them. Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from Rain Chapman
Boy that Ginger is a catty little thing, isn't she. Yay, their first kiss and he really is a gentleman. I think you have his character down pat, I have several friends in the military and Joe reminds me of at least one of them. Great chapter.
Rain :^)
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Boy that Ginger is a catty little thing, isn't she. Yay, their first kiss and he really is a gentleman. I think you have his character down pat, I have several friends in the military and Joe reminds me of at least one of them. Great chapter.
Rain :^)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2010
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2010
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Thank you for your kind review and support. My husband retired in Sept after 23 years in the Army.